Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural, concise and slightly more varied in vocabulary. Begin with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Also keep it to no more than five sentences.

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing landscapes and taking selfies because it helps me preserve memories. For example, I often take photos during trips so I can look back on the places I’ve visited.

Suggestion: The answer is unclear and has several grammar and vocabulary errors. Start with a clear preference (urban or rural), give a reason and a brief example, and use linking words for coherence. Keep sentences short and avoid fillers.

Example: I prefer rural views. They make me feel relaxed because I like wide open spaces and quiet fields, and I find city scenes too noisy. For instance, a walk through a countryside trail helps me unwind after a busy week.

Suggestion: The response conveys the idea but is awkward and has unclear phrasing. State your preference directly, explain why with a specific reason, and give a brief example. Use connecting words (because, so, for example) to improve clarity.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because traveling lets me see different landscapes and cultures. For example, when I visit a new country I photograph unique architecture and countryside scenery to remember the experience.

× Yes I do, I just record my moment by taking a photo.

✓ Yes, I do. I just record my moments by taking photos.

Use plural nouns for general habitual actions: 'moment' -> 'moments' and 'a photo' -> 'photos' to match the habitual meaning. Also add punctuation for clarity. This fits present tense habitual context.

× So I enjoy taking a photo, landscape or even my selfie.

✓ So I enjoy taking photos of landscapes or even selfies.

Use plural forms and correct noun phrases: 'taking a photo, landscape' is ungrammatical. Use 'photos of landscapes' and 'selfies' (plural) for general preference. 'My selfie' can be simply 'selfies' for general habit.

× I usually recall fields in rural areas speakers.

✓ I usually recall scenes of fields in rural areas.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and contains 'speakers' incorrectly. Use 'recall scenes of fields' or 'remember fields' to convey memory. 'Recall fields in rural areas' needs an object 'scenes' or 'images' to be grammatical.

× It helps me relaxable and calm so and I truly I don't have a lot of opportunity to enjoy the rural SO.

✓ They help me feel relaxed and calm, and I really don't have many opportunities to enjoy the countryside.

Use correct adjective/adverb forms: 'relaxable' is incorrect; use 'relaxed'. Use 'feel relaxed and calm'. 'I truly I don't' is redundant; use 'I really don't'. 'a lot of opportunity' should be 'many opportunities' and 'the rural SO' is unclear—use 'the countryside' or 'rural areas'. Also match plural 'they' if referring to fields or scenes.

× I prefer other countries because it's, uh, not common opportunity to view the urban or rural in other countries when I go to travel, so I couldn't see that.

✓ I prefer other countries because it's not common to have the opportunity to see urban or rural scenes in other countries when I travel, so I don't usually get to see them.

Incorrect preposition and article use: 'not common opportunity' should be 'not common to have the opportunity'. 'view the urban or rural' is vague; use 'see urban or rural scenes'. Tense inconsistency: 'couldn't see that' should match present habitual travel 'don't usually get to see them'. Adjust articles and plural pronouns accordingly.

× So I usually capture the moment.

✓ So I usually capture the moments.

Use plural 'moments' to indicate regular, habitual action. Present tense 'usually capture' is correct; only noun number needed to match habitual context.