Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Correct your grammar and make the response more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail and use a linking word. For example, change tense and word forms (“I always take photos”), avoid repetition, and give a brief reason or detail about what you photograph or why.

Example: Yes, I do. I always take photos when I visit beautiful places because I like capturing the colors and light. For example, at the beach I often photograph the sunset and reflections on the water.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then provide specific reasons with correct vocabulary (e.g., “air quality is better” not “air quality is less”). Use linking words like “because” and avoid vague phrases. Also correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and avoid repetition.

Example: I prefer rural views because the air is much cleaner and the scenery is less crowded. For example, country lanes and green fields are quieter and have fewer cars, so I can relax and take better photos.

Suggestion: Answer directly whether you prefer views at home or abroad, then provide specific examples and correct word choice (e.g., “places” not “palace”, use articles and plural agreement). Use a linking word like “for example” and give a brief reason why you like those views.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because India has diverse landscapes. For example, Kashmir has beautiful hill stations and scenic lakes, which offer unforgettable mountain and lake views that I enjoy photographing.

× Yes, I always taking photo when I go on a fantastic and beautiful place there.

✓ Yes, I always take photos when I go to a fantastic and beautiful place.

The student used the present progressive form 'taking' where the simple present 'take' is required for habitual actions (always indicates a routine). Also 'photo' should be plural 'photos' for general activities, and preposition and word order corrected: 'go to a place' instead of 'go on a place', and removed redundant 'there'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits: 'I always take photos when I go to a beautiful place.'

× I I always click some photo when I go to beachside.

✓ I always click some photos when I go to the beachside.

There is a duplicated 'I' and the verb 'click' as used here is acceptable but in simple present for first person no change is needed; main issue is article and plural. 'Photo' should be plural 'photos' for general action. Also 'beachside' usually takes the definite article 'the' in this context. Suggestion: remove duplication and use plural and article: 'I always click some photos when I go to the beachside.'

× Rural areas I prefer to rural area because their air quality is very very less as compared to city.

✓ I prefer rural areas because their air quality is much better than the city's.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and pronoun/reference errors: 'Rural areas I prefer to rural area' is ungrammatical. 'Their' is ambiguous but can refer to 'rural areas' (plural) — that part is okay but the comparison uses 'less' incorrectly. 'Less' should not be used with 'air quality' here; instead compare directly: 'much better than the city's.' Also article 'city' needs 'the' or possessive 'city's'. Suggestion: reorder to 'I prefer rural areas because their air quality is much better than the city's.'

× In city they are many cars and truck which create pollution and also air quality is very high.

✓ In the city there are many cars and trucks that create pollution, and the air pollution level is high.

Multiple issues: missing article 'the' before 'city'; incorrect subject-verb order 'they are' should be 'there are'; 'truck' should be plural 'trucks' to match 'many'; 'which' is acceptable but 'that' is more natural; 'air quality is very high' is incorrect because 'high air quality' means good air, but the student likely means high pollution or poor air quality. I changed to 'air pollution level is high.' Suggestion: use 'There are many cars and trucks in the city that create pollution.'

× Yes, I belong to India.

✓ Yes, I am from India.

'Belong to' is incorrect for indicating nationality or origin in English. Use 'I am from India' or 'I belong to India' is unnatural. Use the verb 'to be' for origin. Suggestion: say 'I am from India.'

× In India there are many tourist palace, for example Kashmir, Kashmir in which there are beautiful hill stations and many lakes.

✓ In India there are many tourist places; for example, Kashmir, which has beautiful hill stations and many lakes.

Several article and word choice errors: 'tourist palace' should be 'tourist places' ('palace' is wrong meaning), missing punctuation and redundant repetition 'Kashmir, Kashmir'. 'In which there are' is awkward; better: 'Kashmir, which has...'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use 'tourist places' and restructure: 'In India there are many tourist places; for example, Kashmir, which has beautiful hill stations and many lakes.'

× The view are very fantastic and unforgettable.

✓ The views are fantastic and unforgettable.

Subject-verb agreement and number: 'The view are' is incorrect because 'view' (singular) does not match plural verb 'are'. Either make subject plural 'views' to match 'are' or change verb to 'is'. Also 'very fantastic' is redundant; 'fantastic' alone is sufficient. Suggestion: use 'The views are fantastic and unforgettable.'