Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetitions and filler words, and give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Use correct verb forms and articles.

Example: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. When I travel, I especially enjoy photographing landscapes and cityscapes because they capture the atmosphere of a place. For example, I often take wide shots of mountain ranges and close-ups of interesting buildings to remember my trips.

Suggestion: Make the response direct and logical. State preference (or say you like both) clearly, then use linking words (for example, however) to contrast urban and rural views. Replace fillers with precise vocabulary and give specific examples of what you like in each setting.

Example: I like both urban and rural views for different reasons. For example, in urban areas I enjoy the modern architecture and busy streets because they feel energetic. However, rural areas appeal to me for their peaceful fields and small villages, which are relaxing and photogenic.

Suggestion: Clarify the meaning and correct grammar. Begin with a clear statement of preference or say you enjoy both, then give precise reasons and an example. Avoid vague phrases like 'most view' or 'my memorial' and use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: I enjoy views both at home and abroad, but for different reasons. At home, I appreciate familiar landscapes and cultural landmarks because they feel meaningful to me. In other countries, I love discovering modern skylines and new scenery, which broaden my perspective and create special travel memories.

× Yes, I really love taking picture of different views.

✓ Yes, I really love taking pictures of different views.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because 'taking' implies a habitual or repeated action and 'different views' is plural. Use plural to agree with the idea of multiple instances. Suggestion: use 'pictures' when referring to more than one photo.

× Uh, actually I on which capturing the scenery of different views when I travel, travel in the in everywhere and I feel so excited when I can.

✓ Actually, I often capture the scenery of different places when I travel, everywhere I go, and I feel very excited when I can.

This sentence has multiple structure errors: an incorrect phrase 'I on which capturing' and redundant words. I replaced it with 'I often capture' to express habitual action (present simple). 'Different views' changed to 'different places' for clarity and 'travel, travel in the in everywhere' simplified to 'everywhere I go'. Suggestion: form a clear subject-verb phrase (I often capture) and avoid repeating words.

× To be honest, I, I like both because in the open areas I can see the, uh, crowded places in CD and it's a modern scenery and uh, rural areas I can see the camp and umm, uh, loneliness.

✓ To be honest, I like both because in open areas I can see crowded places and modern scenery, and in rural areas I can see farms and a sense of loneliness.

Preposition and word choice issues: 'in the open areas' -> 'in open areas' is natural; 'crowded places in CD' unclear so removed 'in CD'; 'camp' likely intended 'farm' or 'campsite' — I used 'farms'. Also 'loneliness' should be 'a sense of loneliness' to be grammatical. Suggestion: choose correct prepositions ('in open areas') and precise nouns ('farms', 'a sense of loneliness').

× I like port views in local areas I can see the most view and in the foreign area I can see the, uh, modern views of, uh, two different places when I come from.

✓ I like local views because I can see familiar scenery, and in foreign countries I can see modern views that are different from mine.

Incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing: 'port views in local areas' unclear; 'the most view' incorrect. I replaced with 'local views' and 'familiar scenery'. 'Foreign area' changed to 'foreign countries' and 'two different places when I come from' simplified to 'different from mine'. Suggestion: use clear prepositions ('in', 'from') and concise expressions ('different from mine').

× And I really love to this for my moments in my memorial.

✓ And I really love to do this to capture moments as memories.

Awkward and incorrect word choice: 'love to this' should be 'love to do this'; 'in my memorial' is incorrect — 'as memories' or 'for my memories' is appropriate. Suggestion: use correct verb form 'do' after 'love to' and choose correct noun 'memories'.