Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundant phrases and fix errors (e.g., 'different fields' -> 'different views', 'is close to areas' unclear).

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me capture memorable moments and the beauty of places I visit. For example, when I travel to the mountains I take landscape photos to record the light and atmosphere, and I often share the best shots with friends.

Suggestion: Use precise vocabulary and correct grammar; begin with a direct topic sentence, then add a specific reason with a linking word. Replace vague terms like 'fields' and 'sand fields' if inaccurate, and correct agreement errors (e.g., 'helps' -> 'help').

Example: I prefer rural views because the open countryside and greenery are more relaxing than the busy city. For example, wide meadows, clusters of trees and distant hills help me unwind after a stressful week, whereas city streets often feel noisy and crowded.

Suggestion: Clarify the main point and correct many grammatical and lexical errors. Start with a clear opinion (own country or abroad), then give two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and unrelated words ('foods').

Example: I prefer views in my own country because they are familiar and connected to personal memories, such as childhood trips to local mountains and lakes. However, I also appreciate scenery abroad because it offers novel and dramatic landscapes—for instance, the fjords of Norway provide a very different and inspiring perspective.

× For example, when I've traveled to mountains or is close to areas, I often photograph landscapes to remember the light, atmosphere and sharing these images with friends brings me pleasure.

✓ For example, when I travel to mountains or nearby areas, I often photograph landscapes to remember the light and atmosphere, and sharing these images with friends brings me pleasure.

Original errors: 'I've traveled to mountains' mixes present perfect with a general habit; use simple present 'I travel' for habitual action. 'is close to areas' is ungrammatical — should be 'nearby areas'. The conjunctions and gerund phrase were mislinked: 'to remember the light, atmosphere and sharing' incorrectly coordinates infinitive and gerund. Use parallel structures: 'to remember the light and atmosphere, and sharing... brings me pleasure.' Suggestion: use consistent tense for habitual actions, replace incorrect phrase with 'nearby', and ensure parallel structure when combining infinitives and gerunds.

× For example, sand fields, trees and distant hills helps me unwind after a busy week, whereas urban views often feel noisy and congest.

✓ For example, sand fields, trees and distant hills help me unwind after a busy week, whereas urban views often feel noisy and congested.

Subject 'sand fields, trees and distant hills' is plural so the verb must be 'help' (not 'helps') — a third person plural agreement error. Also 'congest' is incorrect as an adjective; the correct adjective is 'congested'. Suggestion: match verb number to subject and use proper adjective forms.

× If we refuse in my own country because they are familiar and if your personal memories, such as childhood trips to local mountains or lakes.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because they are familiar and connected to personal memories, such as childhood trips to local mountains or lakes.

Original sentence fragments and unclear pronoun usage create a sentence structure error. 'If we refuse' is incorrect and makes the sentence a fragment. The pronouns 'they' and 'your' are inconsistent with 'we'. Correction uses a complete structure: 'I prefer... because they are familiar and connected to personal memories.' Suggestion: state the subject clearly ('I prefer') and maintain consistent pronouns and a complete clause.

× However, I also enjoy scenery abroad for its novelty, novelty and unique landscapes.

✓ However, I also enjoy scenery abroad for its novelty and unique landscapes.

The word 'novelty' is repeated, which is a lexical redundancy error (use of adjectives). Remove the duplicate to improve clarity. Suggestion: avoid repeating the same adjective; choose one strong descriptor or pair distinct ones.

× For example, dramatic foods and Norway, which offer a fresh perspective and inspire travel.

✓ For example, dramatic fjords in Norway offer a fresh perspective and inspire travel.

Original sentence fragments and wrong word choice cause a structure error: 'dramatic foods and Norway' is nonsensical ('foods' likely intended 'fjords'), and the clause is a fragment. Correction replaces the wrong noun with 'fjords' and forms a complete clause. Suggestion: ensure word choice matches context (landscapes), and write a complete sentence with subject and verb.