Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer directly addresses the question and gives reasons, but it is slightly repetitive and a bit long. To improve, make a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating the same idea, and add one specific example or detail. Keep it concise (no more than 3–4 sentences) and use a linking word to connect your reason and example.

Example: Yes, I do. I prefer photographing multiple views because it gives me a variety of compositions to choose from. For example, when I shoot a city skyline I take wide, close-up and angled shots so I can pick the best one later.

Suggestion: Your answer communicates preference and reasons, but there are pronunciation/word-choice errors (e.g., 'call' should be 'calm'), some repetition, and some rambling. To improve, correct key vocabulary, use a clear topic sentence, provide one specific supporting detail, and avoid off-topic philosophical remarks that don't add concrete information. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

Example: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and less crowded. For instance, when I visit the countryside I enjoy quiet walks by the river, which helps me relax and focus on my photography.

Suggestion: Your answer states a clear preference and gives a reason, but it has hesitations and repetition ('they they', 'but but', 'is is'), and a few awkward phrases ('in other accounts' should be 'in other countries'). To improve, remove hesitations, correct the phrase, and add one concrete example of what’s novel about foreign views. Keep it concise and use a linking word.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new perspectives and memories. For example, seeing the architecture and street life in Japan gives me fresh visual ideas that I don't find at home.

× Yes, I prefer taking pictures of different views rather than one view because I believe that taking pictures of different views gives me more options to choose from and there are specific angles that I really like and there are some that I don't like.

✓ Yes, I prefer taking pictures of different views rather than just one, because I believe that different views give me more options to choose from; there are specific angles I really like and others I don't.

Multiple issues: sentence was wordy and had repetition. Relevant grammar problems: 26 Sentence structure errors (run-on and repetition) and 22 Article errors ('one view' could be 'just one'). Suggestion: simplify by removing repeated phrases and using concise connectors (use a semicolon or separate into two sentences), and replace redundant 'taking pictures of different views' with 'different views' where context is clear.

× Personally, I prefer views in rural areas because it makes me call.

✓ Personally, I prefer views in rural areas because they make me calm.

Present tense and pronoun agreement issue: 'it makes me call' is incorrect. Correct subject is plural 'views', so use plural verb 'make' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27) and correct word 'calm' not 'call' (word choice). Relevant grammar types: 6 Present tense issue and 27 Subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree in number and choose correct vocabulary.

× Knowing that there are no people makes me calm and when it's the my environment is calm, I can concentrate on things that I have to get done or I can even chill, listen to music and really understand the meaning of life.

✓ Knowing that there are no people makes me calm, and when my environment is calm I can concentrate on the things I have to get done, or I can even relax, listen to music, and reflect on life.

Errors include wrong article usage 'the my environment' (17 Incorrect use of the definite article) and awkward phrasing 'really understand the meaning of life.' Main problems: 27 Subject-verb agreement and 17 Article errors plus 26 Sentence structure. Suggestions: remove redundant words, use 'my environment' without 'the', replace informal 'chill' with 'relax' in formal speech, and streamline clauses with commas.

× I prefer views in other countries. They they are a variety of reasons, but but one of the most important reasons why I prefer views in other accounts is is because that view is a new perspective and a new memory for me.

✓ I prefer views in other countries for a variety of reasons, but one of the most important is that a view from another country gives me a new perspective and creates new memories for me.

Multiple errors: repeated words ('They they', 'but but', 'is is') and incorrect word 'accounts' instead of 'countries' and awkward clause 'because that view is a new perspective.' Relevant grammar types: 26 Sentence structure errors (redundancy and repetition), 12 Incorrect use of pronouns/words, and 11 Incorrect use of prepositions/words. Suggestions: remove repetitions, use the correct noun 'countries', combine ideas into a fluent sentence, and avoid unnecessary 'because' when 'is that' suffices.

× Because in my own country I already know every single angle, every single perspective.

✓ In my own country, I already know every angle and every perspective.

Sentence fragment starting with 'Because' creates a dependent clause without a main clause (23 Sentence without a verb / 26 Sentence structure errors). The original was attached to previous sentence; when standalone it becomes a fragment. Suggestion: attach it to the previous sentence or remove 'Because' and add a comma to form a complete sentence; also simplify redundancy 'every single' to 'every' for concision.