Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason or example. Avoid fillers like 'yeah' and 'I suppose' which weaken your statement. Use one linking word if you add a second sentence.

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because each place has unique colours and shapes; for example, I love capturing sunsets over the river in my city.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer and support it with specific details. Remove disfluencies ('uh') and correct wrong words (e.g., 'urban wheels'). Use one or two concise supporting details connected with a linking phrase like 'because' or 'for example'.

Example: I prefer urban views because I enjoy city lights and tall buildings; for example, I like photographing skyline reflections at night.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly. State your preference and give a specific reason or brief example. Avoid repeating words and filler sounds. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast opinions if needed.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultures; however, I still appreciate the familiar scenery of my own country.

× Yes, I yeah, I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

The sentence contains an extra filler 'I yeah,' which disrupts pronoun use and sentence clarity. Remove the redundant filler so the subject pronoun 'I' appears only once and the response is concise.

× I like taking pictures of different views and then I suppose some people prefer it.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views, although I suppose some people prefer other types of photos.

The original sentence incorrectly connects two ideas with 'and then' and uses the pronoun 'it' unclearly. Replace 'and then' with a conjunction that shows contrast ('although') and specify what 'it' refers to ('other types of photos') to clarify meaning and improve sentence structure.

× I prefer, uh, urban wheels because, uh, I like city lights and high buildings, uh, and uh, another things.

✓ I prefer urban areas because I like city lights and tall buildings and other things.

'Urban wheels' is incorrect word choice; use 'urban areas.' 'High buildings' is acceptable but 'tall buildings' is more natural. 'Another things' is ungrammatical; use 'other things.' Remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary commas for fluency.

× If I go to another country, uh, I like, uh, views, uh, some place and I prefer views, uh, another countries, but uh, all, uh, people like, uh, their country's views.

✓ If I go to another country, I like the views there, and I prefer views in other countries, but most people like the views of their own country.

The original has incorrect noun phrases and prepositions: 'views, some place' and 'views, another countries' are ungrammatical. Use 'the views there' to refer to views in that country, 'views in other countries' for preference, and 'their own country' for possession. Also replace 'all' with 'most' for naturalness. Remove filler 'uh' for clarity.