Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more concise and varied in vocabulary, and add a brief example to make it more specific. Keep within 3–4 sentences and use a linking word when adding supporting detail.

Example: Yes, I do. I often photograph flower landscapes because I enjoy their vivid colors and intricate details. I also sometimes capture the sky, as its changing colors and cloud patterns can be very striking; for example, I took a photo of a pink-orange sunset last week that I really liked.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and word choice, remove redundancy, and be specific about what you like in each setting. Use linking words to compare and contrast and correct wrong words (e.g., 'living city' -> 'lively city', 'pitfalls' is incorrect here). Limit to 3–4 clear sentences.

Example: It depends on my mood. When I’m energized I prefer the lively city because tall buildings and busy streets create dynamic photo opportunities; for example, I like shooting city lights at night. However, when I want to relax I choose the countryside for peaceful landscapes and open fields.

Suggestion: Fix grammar and clarity, use correct nouns and adjectives, and give a specific comparison and brief example. Avoid repetition and incorrect words (e.g., 'genie' -> 'gorgeous' or 'unique'). Keep answer within 2–3 sentences with a linking word to contrast.

Example: I generally prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and often bring back personal memories from family trips or festivals. However, I also enjoy landscapes abroad for their novelty and unique scenery, such as dramatic coastal cliffs I photographed on a recent holiday.

× I often take many pictures of flower landscapes because I love the colors and details, and sometimes I focus on the sky too, since this looks different every day and can be very striking.

✓ I often take many pictures of flower landscapes because I love the colors and details, and sometimes I focus on the sky too, since it looks different every day and can be very striking.

Error type IDs: 1 and 22. The phrase 'this looks different' incorrectly uses 'this' to refer to 'the sky'; 'it' is the correct pronoun for a singular noun (incorrect use of pronouns/subject reference and subject-verb agreement context). Also 'flower landscapes' is acceptable but if meaning 'landscapes of flowers' it's fine. Suggestion: use 'it' to refer back to 'the sky' so the sentence reads naturally.

× I prefer it depending on my mood.

✓ It depends on my mood.

Error type IDs: 27 and 26. The original sentence uses an unnecessary dummy object 'I prefer it', which causes a sentence-structure and subject-verb alignment problem. The intended meaning is to state that the preference depends on mood, so the correct subject is 'it' and verb 'depends'. Suggestion: use 'It depends on my mood' to express variability of preference.

× Sometimes I enjoy the living city with the tall building and busy streets.

✓ Sometimes I enjoy the lively city with the tall buildings and busy streets.

Error type IDs: 22 and 1 and 13. 'Living city' is unnatural; 'lively' (adjective) conveys motion and energy (incorrect use of adjective). 'The tall building' should be plural 'tall buildings' because 'busy streets' is plural and we mean multiple buildings generally. Suggestion: use 'lively city' and pluralize 'building' to 'buildings' for agreement.

× But when I want to relax I like to go into the small suburb town to enjoy pitfalls and countryside views to take pictures.

✓ But when I want to relax I like to go to a small suburban town to enjoy peaceful countryside views and take pictures.

Error type IDs: 11 and 13 and 1. 'Go into the small suburb town' is incorrect preposition and noun form; use 'go to a small suburban town'. 'Suburb' is a noun; the adjective is 'suburban'. 'Pitfalls' is wrong word choice (means traps); likely intended 'peaceful' or 'pleasant'. Also 'countryside views' should be paired with 'take pictures' — reordering for clarity. Suggestion: use 'go to a small suburban town' and replace 'pitfalls' with an appropriate adjective such as 'peaceful'.

× I prefer a view in my own country because there are familiar and often hold personal memories such as family trips or festivals.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because they are familiar and often hold personal memories, such as family trips or festivals.

Error type IDs: 22 and 12 and 1. 'I prefer a view' is odd; better 'views' plural to match general preference. The clause 'there are familiar' is ungrammatical—use 'they are familiar' to refer to 'views' (pronoun agreement). Also add a comma before the example list. Suggestion: use plural 'views' and correct pronoun to 'they' for clear reference.

× However, I also enjoy in another country also for the novelty and genie landscapes.

✓ However, I also enjoy visiting other countries for the novelty and genuine landscapes.

Error type IDs: 11 and 13. 'Enjoy in another country' is incorrect preposition and structure; use 'enjoy visiting other countries'. 'Genie' is a misspelling/wrong word; intended 'genuine' or perhaps 'scenic'. Suggestion: use 'visiting other countries' and replace 'genie' with 'genuine' if meaning authentic, or 'scenic' if meaning attractive landscapes.