Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct tense and word choice (e.g. ‘see acute things’ → ‘see interesting things’). Keep to a maximum of 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph natural scenes like fields, hills and interesting rock formations because I like capturing textures and light. Also, when I notice something unusual or beautiful, I take a close-up to preserve the detail.

Suggestion: Provide a concise direct answer followed by clear, specific supporting details and linking words. Fix repetition and vocabulary (e.g. ‘living Organism’ → ‘wildlife’). Use 2–3 sentences and a linking word like ‘because’ or ‘for example’.

Example: I prefer rural views because they offer more natural scenery. For example, I enjoy seeing green fields, mountains and wildlife like birds, and flowers, which feel relaxing and healthier for the eyes.

Suggestion: Answer directly and explain briefly with clear reasons and correct phrases. Avoid unclear expressions (e.g. ‘you are the soda’) and unnecessary repetition. Use linking words such as ‘because’ and ‘also’ and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer seeing views in other countries because they offer new scenery and cultures. For instance, since I grew up in my home country, I want to explore different landscapes and learn how people live elsewhere.

× I really like taking pictures especially the views are in field or if I have any see acute things I also took pictures on it and especially if in the nature, the vibes, the topography I also took picture of it.

✓ I really like taking pictures, especially views in fields, and if I see any interesting things I also take pictures of them; especially in nature, the scenery and topography, I also take pictures of those.

Errors: incorrect verb forms and -ing usage, past tense 'took' used inconsistently with present habitual 'like', incorrect phrasing ('see acute things'). Suggestions: Use the gerund 'taking' correctly for the hobby, keep present simple for habitual actions ('I take pictures'), use plural nouns for general statements ('fields', 'things', 'those'), and replace vague/incorrect phrases with clear ones ('interesting things', 'scenery'). Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I prefer the view of the rural, rural areas because there are a lot of things to see, green, green grass of home, as they say, where a lot of mountains, birds, living Organism and it is healthy in our eyes to see that things, particularly the grass, the flowers, the trees, which is very.

✓ I prefer rural areas because there are many things to see: green grass, mountains, birds and other living organisms; it is healthy for our eyes to see these things, particularly the grass, flowers and trees, which is very pleasant.

Errors: unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'rural', inconsistent pluralization and article use ('the grass' vs 'green grass'), and awkward noun phrases. Suggestions: Use 'rural areas' without 'the' for general preference, use 'many' instead of 'a lot of' for formal clarity, ensure plural nouns for general categories ('birds', 'organisms'), and complete the adjective 'pleasant' to finish the clause. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× I prefer to view or to see the view in the other country, because here in our country it is where you grow up.

✓ I prefer to see the view in another country, because here in our country you grow up.

Errors: incorrect article 'the other country' and awkward pronoun 'it is where you grow up'. Suggestions: Use 'another country' for a non-specific foreign country, remove unnecessary 'it is' and keep 'you grow up' directly to sound natural. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× You already notice that you are the soda.

✓ You already notice that you are used to it.

Errors: nonsensical phrase 'you are the soda' and tense/idiom misuse. Suggestions: Replace with idiomatic expression 'used to it' to indicate familiarity; keep present simple 'you notice' for general truth. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× But in my situation right now, in my current age, I want to see other views.

✓ But right now, at my current age, I want to see other views.

Errors: redundancy 'situation right now, in my current age' and slight word order awkwardness. Suggestions: Simplify to 'right now, at my current age' and keep present simple 'I want' for current desire. Grammar problem type ID: 6