Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence, shorten and organize your answer into 2–3 sentences, and avoid repetition. Use linking words and provide a brief specific example of a memorable photo to make the answer more concrete.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it relaxes me and helps me remember places. For example, when I visited the Ghats in Varanasi last year, I photographed the sunrise over the river, which made me feel peaceful and captured the atmosphere perfectly.

Suggestion: Start with a concise direct statement, then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words (e.g., because, whereas, for example). Avoid repeating phrases like 'rural area' too often.

Example: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more natural. For example, rural landscapes with fields and small villages feel calmer than busy city streets, so I enjoy photographing open fields and traditional houses.

Suggestion: Make a direct statement, avoid exaggerated claims, and provide a specific reason and example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for instance' and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because India offers a wide variety of landscapes and cultural scenes. For instance, Kashmir’s lakes and mountains left a strong impression on me, so I often choose to photograph scenic places at home.

× Indeed, I do love to record and shoot Whenever I'm at a different place, I feel that different views and capturing them give me a sense of peace and enjoyment, which I feel is very good.

✓ Indeed, I do love recording and shooting. Whenever I'm in a different place, I feel that different views and capturing them give me a sense of peace and enjoyment, which I find very satisfying.

Use of verbs: 'love to record and shoot' is acceptable but parallel gerunds 'love recording and shooting' are more natural here (Grammar Problem Type ID 8). Also punctuation and sentence boundary needed: separate into two sentences. Preposition: use 'in a different place' rather than 'at' for being located within a place (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). 'I feel is very good' is vague; 'I find very satisfying' is clearer and uses correct adjective choice (Grammar Problem Type ID 13).

× I prefer the views of rural areas more as I feel that urban areas are quite developed and because of the infrastructure and buildings over there, I don't enjoy the environment that much as I do when I'm at a rural area or a village.

✓ I prefer views of rural areas because urban areas are quite developed, and because of the infrastructure and buildings there, I don't enjoy the environment as much as I do in a rural area or a village.

Prepositions and articles: remove extra 'the' before 'views' and use 'in a rural area' instead of 'at a rural area' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11 and 22). Word order and redundancy: 'prefer the views of rural areas more' is awkward; 'prefer views of rural areas' is concise. Use 'as much as' comparative structure correctly (Grammar Problem Type ID 25).

× Well, my country India is a diverse nation with many beautiful and mesmerizing sights. I prefer the views of my country more because I feel it is the most beautiful country in the whole world such as Kashmir which is known as the heaven on the earth.

✓ Well, my country, India, is a diverse nation with many beautiful and mesmerizing sights. I prefer the views of my country because I feel it is one of the most beautiful countries in the world, for example Kashmir, which is known as heaven on earth.

Article and phrasing issues: add commas around 'India' as an appositive. 'Prefer the views of my country more' -> 'prefer the views of my country' to avoid redundant 'more' (Grammar Problem Type ID 22). 'The most beautiful country in the whole world' is hyperbolic; grammatically better 'one of the most beautiful countries in the world.' Remove 'the' before 'heaven on earth' and drop extra articles: 'known as heaven on earth' is correct (Grammar Problem Type ID 17 and 22).