Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce hesitation sounds (uh), correct grammar (e.g., "whenever I get a chance to go to a new place") and avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas. Keep answers within 3–4 concise sentences: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, "for instance" or "so"). Use varied vocabulary such as "scenery," "vistas," or "landforms."

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially sunsets and sunrises. For instance, whenever I get a chance to visit a new place, I take my camera to capture landscapes and mountain vistas. These photos help me remember the atmosphere and lighting of each location.

Suggestion: Correct grammatical errors (e.g., "in my opinion" placement, "I usually go to those places"), reduce repetition and improve coherence with linking words (e.g., "because," "therefore"). Be specific about what you like in rural areas and give a brief comparison with urban views. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer rural views because, in my opinion, they offer more natural beauty and peaceful surroundings. For example, I enjoy mountain landscapes and quiet fields, whereas urban areas often feel crowded and noisy.

Suggestion: Remove filler words (uh), improve phrasing (e.g., "culturally rich" instead of "culturally populated"), and give a specific example of a festival or location to make the answer more vivid. Use a topic sentence plus one specific supporting detail with a linking word like "for example."

Example: I prefer views in my own country because it is culturally rich and full of photogenic events. For example, local festivals and historical sites provide colorful scenes and unique traditions that I enjoy photographing.

× I like photographing, uh, sunsets, sunrises, landscapes, some of uh, mountains.

✓ I like photographing sunsets, sunrises, landscapes and some mountains.

The original sentence had unnecessary commas and filler words; also 'some of mountains' is incorrect. Use 'some mountains' and link items with 'and'. 'Photographing' is correct as a gerund (verb + -ing) after 'like'. Keep the gerund and correct the noun phrase structure. Suggestions: remove fillers (uh), use 'and' before the final item, and say 'some mountains'.

× Uh, usually whenever I go chance to go to new place, I always take my camera and click different types of pictures.

✓ Usually, whenever I have a chance to go to a new place, I always take my camera and take different kinds of pictures.

The phrase 'go chance to go' is ungrammatical. Use present-tense habitual structure 'have a chance' for repeated actions. 'New place' needs an article: 'a new place'. 'Click different types of pictures' is colloquial; 'take different kinds of pictures' fits formal speech. Suggestions: use 'have a chance', include articles, and prefer 'take' over 'click' for photos.

× I prefer views in rural areas, not in urban areas because I in my opinion rural areas have more natural beauty, more landscapes and more mountains and they also contain a peaceful space, so I usually also like to went to those places.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas rather than urban areas because, in my opinion, rural areas have more natural beauty, more landscapes and mountains, and they are more peaceful, so I usually like to go to those places.

Problems include wrong pronoun placement and tense: 'I in my opinion' should be 'in my opinion' (phrase order). 'They also contain a peaceful space' is awkward; use 'they are more peaceful'. 'I usually also like to went' mixes present habit 'usually like' with past 'went' — use base verb 'go'. Suggestions: move 'in my opinion' to correct position, use 'are more peaceful', and use present tense 'go' for habitual action.

× I prefer views in my own country rather than other countries, uh, because my own country is very culturally populated.

✓ I prefer views in my own country rather than in other countries because my country is very culturally rich.

'Very culturally populated' is incorrect collocation. Use 'culturally rich' to describe many cultural features. Also include 'in' before 'other countries' for parallel structure. Avoid filler 'uh'. Suggestions: use parallel prepositional phrases and correct adjective choice 'culturally rich'.

× We have different festivals, we have different cultural places to visit where I can take photographs and I like those views also.

✓ We have many festivals and various cultural sites to visit where I can take photographs, and I like those views too.

Run-on sentence with repeated 'we have different' sounds awkward. Use coordination and better quantifiers: 'many' and 'various'. 'Cultural places' is better as 'cultural sites'. Place 'too' at end. Suggestions: combine clauses with 'and', use varied vocabulary, and place adverb 'too' properly.