Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and direct: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar (e.g., "I have a TikTok account" not "I am social media account") and avoid repetition. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy photographing different views. I have a TikTok account where I post landscape and city photos, and I often edit them slightly before uploading. Because I want to share my travels with friends, I try to capture scenes with interesting light or color.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Avoid unclear phrases like "nice pollution"; use accurate vocabulary such as "clean air" or "less noise". Limit to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

Example: I prefer rural areas because the scenery is more natural and calming. For example, there are open fields, mountains, and less traffic, so the air is cleaner and it feels quieter than the city.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer first (e.g., prefer own country or both), then specify 2–3 named places with short reasons. Use correct sentence structure and vocabulary (e.g., 'Pakistan has many beautiful places such as Gilgit, Swat and Murree' and explain why). Avoid unclear words like "lawyers" or "catchy beach".

Example: I prefer views in my own country because Pakistan has many beautiful regions. For instance, Gilgit offers dramatic mountain landscapes, Swat has lush valleys and rivers, and Islamabad has well-planned parks and nearby hills, so I enjoy visiting all of them.

× Yes I like pictures.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures.

The student used 'I like pictures' which is awkward and lacks the verb about the action. The intended meaning is liking the activity of taking pictures; use the gerund 'taking pictures' or say 'I like photos' for liking objects. Also add a comma after 'Yes' for clarity.

× I am social media account in Tiktok.

✓ I have a social media account on TikTok.

The student used 'I am social media account', incorrectly treating 'account' as identity. The correct verb is 'have' to indicate possession. Use the preposition 'on' with platforms (TikTok). Also capitalize the brand name 'TikTok'.

× I am taking pictures and uploading social media.

✓ I take pictures and upload them to social media.

The progressive 'I am taking' can be used for ongoing actions but here a habitual action is intended, so use simple present 'I take' and 'upload'. Also include object 'them' and preposition 'to social media' to make the sentence complete.

× I am prefers rural areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas.

The student combined 'I am' with 'prefers', which is ungrammatical. For the first person singular use 'I prefer' (simple present). Remove 'am' and use base verb 'prefer'.

× Much better views than urban areas views.

✓ They have much better views than urban areas.

The original fragment lacks a clear subject and repeats 'views'. Use a subject 'They' (referring to rural areas) or restructure: 'Rural areas have much better views than urban areas.' Avoid redundant words.

× Rural areas much peace, peaceful places and nice pollution.

✓ Rural areas are peaceful places with nice air and little pollution.

The phrase 'much peace' is unnatural; use 'are peaceful places'. 'Nice pollution' is incorrect because pollution is negative; likely meant 'nice air' or 'little pollution'. Add the verb 'are' and correct nouns/adjectives for meaning.

× Not these areas.

✓ Not urban areas.

This fragment is vague and lacks grammatical structure. Clarify the contrast: 'Not urban areas.' or better, 'I prefer rural, not urban areas.'

× I am preferred Pakistan country lawyers most beautiful country Gilgit, Sawat and Mari also Islamabad catchy beach is all of these places very beautiful?

✓ I prefer Pakistan. My country has many beautiful places such as Gilgit, Swat and Murree, and Islamabad's nearby areas are also very beautiful.

This sentence has multiple grammatical problems: wrong tense 'I am preferred' (should be 'I prefer' present simple), incorrect word order and missing connectors. 'Pakistan country lawyers' is nonsensical; likely meant 'Pakistan, my country'. Place names misspelled: 'Sawat' -> 'Swat', 'Mari' -> 'Murree'. 'catchy beach' is unclear; replaced with 'nearby areas' to convey beauty. Break into clear clauses with correct verbs and articles.