Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Avoid filler words ("you know", "I don't know") and repetition. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., capture/photograph, scenery/landscape) and one linking phrase (e.g., "for example" or "because") to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially landscapes. For example, I like taking pictures after rain because the clouds move dramatically and the colors become richer, which makes the scene more striking.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons with concrete details. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly and avoid repeating phrases. Replace vague words like "so good" with precise descriptions (e.g., peaceful, vibrant colors).

Example: I prefer rural views because they have more greenery and peaceful surroundings. For instance, the deep greens of the trees and the open sky create vivid colors and a unique calmness that I rarely find in the city.

Suggestion: Answer directly with one main reason and support it with specific, non-repetitive details. Mention unique features (clear mountain views, city lights at night) and use linking words such as "because" and "also". Keep it within 2–4 sentences and avoid repeating the same point.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I can see mountains clearly from my house. For example, after rain the mountains look especially vivid, and at night the lights from houses on the slopes create a beautiful, cozy scene.

× Yeah, I like capturing picture of different views, like landscapes when, you know, whenever it rains, the weather gets so good.

✓ Yeah, I like capturing pictures of different views, like landscapes; whenever it rains, the weather becomes so nice.

The original uses the singular 'picture' where plural 'pictures' is required because 'capturing' refers to taking multiple photos (Grammar Problem Type ID 8 and 1). Also, 'gets so good' is informal and vague; 'becomes so nice' fits better in this context. Suggestion: use plural nouns with activities that imply multiple items and choose precise verbs for state changes. Grammar problem type ID:1,8

× All the clouds were moving one place to another place and it weather is getting so good though, so good.

✓ All the clouds were moving from one place to another, and the weather was getting so good.

Mixed tenses: 'were moving' is past continuous, but 'weather is getting' shifts to present progressive. Keep tense consistent (past) since the description is of a past event (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). Also remove redundant phrase 'one place to another place' and correct 'it weather' to 'the weather'. Suggestion: keep the same tense and use definite article with 'weather'. Grammar problem type ID:6,11,27

× I don't know.

✓ I don't know.

This sentence is acceptable in conversation as a filler and has no grammar errors requiring correction. No change necessary. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I prefer views in rural areas because there are lots of trees in there and weather gets so good and views getting so good and unique because you don't see that in everyday life and colors get so deep in and it looks so beautiful.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because there are lots of trees there, and the weather gets so good. The views are also very unique and you don't see them in everyday life; the colors become very deep and it looks beautiful.

Multiple issues: unnecessary preposition 'in there' should be 'there' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). 'Weather' needs the definite article 'the' (ID 17/22). 'Views getting so good' lacks a verb form and proper subject-verb agreement; change to 'The views are' or 'the views become' (ID 26/27). 'Colors get so deep in' has an incorrect preposition 'in' and needs 'become' for clarity (ID 11,6). Suggestion: break long run-on sentence into shorter sentences, add articles, ensure verbs agree with subjects, and use appropriate prepositions. Grammar problem type ID:11,17,26,27,6

× I like views in my own country because where I live I can see mountains so clearly from my house and whenever it rains it looks so beautiful and I can see mountains so clearly and even and at night you can see lights from the city and the houses which are on the mountains.

✓ I like the views in my own country because from my house I can see the mountains very clearly. Whenever it rains it looks beautiful, and at night you can see lights from the city and the houses on the mountains.

Add definite articles 'the' before 'views' and 'mountains' where specific ones are meant (Grammar Problem Type ID 22/17). Remove redundant phrases ('so clearly' repeated; extra 'and even'). Improve sentence structure by splitting into shorter sentences (ID 26). Suggestion: use 'the' for specific scenery, avoid repetition, and separate ideas into clear sentences.