Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Работайте над ясной структурой ответа и грамматикой. Начинайте с прямого ответа на вопрос (Yes/No и краткое объяснение), затем добавляйте 1–2 предложения с конкретными деталями. Исправьте временные формы (например, 'I set the goal that I will bought' → 'I set a goal to buy') и используйте более естественные выражения (не 'big patron of the taking pictures'). Избегайте повторов ('really, really') и ненужных слов.

Example: No, I don't take many photos of views. However, I do sometimes photograph really beautiful cars because I find their design fascinating. For example, I often stop to take pictures of classic or sports cars when I see them on the street.

Suggestion: Улучшите связность и точность речи: начните с чётного тезиса, затем используйте связующие слова (because, for example, so) и приведите конкретные примеры. Исправьте ошибки артиклей и словосочетаний ('a good infrastructure', 'interesting buildings'). Избегайте обобщений типа 'nothing interesting' — добавьте баланс (например, признание достоинств сельской местности).

Example: I prefer urban views because cities have interesting architecture and a variety of buildings. For example, modern skyscrapers and historic facades offer different shapes and details that are fun to photograph. Although rural areas have beautiful nature, I find urban forms more visually striking.

Suggestion: Сфокусируйтесь на чётком объяснении причины и используйте правильные слова (skyscrapers, 'other countries' vs 'another city'). Избегайте повтора слов и исправьте порядок слов ('I'm I would prefer' — убрать лишнее). Добавьте конкретный пример страны или города, чтобы сделать ответ более содержательным.

Example: I prefer taking photos in other countries because they often have different styles of architecture. For instance, I would love to photograph the skyscrapers in Dubai or the historic streets of Barcelona, which are quite different from the buildings in my hometown.

× To be honest, I'm not a big patron of the taking pictures, but when it comes to some really, really beautiful cars I will take it 'cause I find it really interesting and I set the goal that I will bought my car in the 18 years old.

✓ To be honest, I'm not a big fan of taking pictures, but when it comes to some really, really beautiful cars I will take them because I find it really interesting and I set the goal that I will buy my car at 18 years old.

The phrase 'the taking pictures' uses an incorrect article and noun form; 'a big patron of' is unnatural here. Use 'a big fan of taking pictures' or simply 'not into taking pictures'. 'Take it' should agree with plural 'cars' as 'take them'. 'Bought' is past tense but the speaker intends future plan; use 'will buy'. 'in the 18 years old' is incorrect preposition and wording; use 'at 18 years old' or 'when I am 18.' Suggestions: remove unnecessary articles, match verb tense for intended meaning, and use correct prepositions for ages.

× I prefer in urban areas because in the rural there are not a good infrastructure like a some buildings which really interesting like forms I mean and in the rural place there are just nature and nothing interesting.

✓ I prefer urban areas because in rural areas there is not good infrastructure, such as interesting buildings with unique forms, and in rural places there is mostly nature and not much else to interest me.

'Prefer in urban areas' incorrectly uses a preposition; 'prefer urban areas' or 'prefer being in urban areas' is correct. 'In the rural' should be 'in rural areas' or 'in the countryside'. 'There are not a good infrastructure' has number and article errors; infrastructure is uncountable and takes singular verb: 'there is not good infrastructure'. 'Like a some buildings' is incorrect article and determiner order; use 'such as' or 'like some buildings'. 'Which really interesting like forms' is fragmented and missing verb; should be 'with interesting forms'. Suggestions: remove unnecessary prepositions, use 'there is' for uncountable nouns, use 'such as' for examples, and keep sentence structure clear.

× That's why I prefer urban areas rather than rural.

✓ That's why I prefer urban areas rather than rural areas.

The original sentence omits the noun after 'rural'. 'Rural' is an adjective and needs a noun to compare with 'urban areas' or use 'the countryside'. Suggestion: complete the comparison phrase by repeating 'areas' or using 'the countryside'.

× Certainly in another country, because in my cities there are not a lot of good views.

✓ Certainly in another country, because in my city there are not a lot of good views.

'In my cities' suggests multiple cities, likely the speaker means 'in my city'. Use singular 'city' if referring to their own city. Also 'there are not a lot of good views' is acceptable but more natural: 'there aren't many good views'. Suggestion: use correct singular/plural to match intended meaning and consider natural collocations.

× I mean, there are no high escapers or something else.

✓ I mean, there are no skyscrapers or anything like that.

'High escapers' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'skyscrapers'. 'Something else' is awkward here; 'anything like that' is more natural. Suggestion: use correct lexical item 'skyscrapers' and natural filler phrases.

× And that's why I'm I would prefer to take a picture in the another city.

✓ And that's why I would prefer to take a picture in another city.

The phrase contains an extra pronoun 'I'm' before 'I would', which is redundant and incorrect. Also 'the another city' incorrectly uses the definite article with 'another'; use 'another city' without 'the'. Suggestion: remove the extra 'I'm' and drop 'the' before 'another'.