Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Уменьшите заполнители (умм, эээ) и повторения; говорите более уверенно и структурированно: начните с краткого утверждения, затем добавьте одну-две конкретные детали и итоговую фразу о значении для вас. Следите за согласованием и грамматикой (например, "take different pictures" и "when I can look at them later").

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of views, especially when I travel with my family. For example, on rare trips abroad we often visit scenic spots, and I like photographing landscapes and cityscapes. These photos help me remember those special moments when I look back at them.

Suggestion: Сформулируйте более прямой ответ и используйте связки для ясности. Начните с выбора (urban or rural), затем приведите конкретный пример и причину. Избегайте повторов ("where I was with my").

Example: I sometimes prefer urban views. For instance, when I visited New York with my family I enjoyed the city skyline and lively streets because there are many photo opportunities and interesting activities to capture.

Suggestion: Уберите междометия и дайте чёткий выбор: скажите, предпочитаете ли вы виды в своей стране или за границей, затем объясните причину с конкретным примером. Следите за завершённостью предложений и порядком слов (например, "beautiful views from the top of the mountains").

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I like rural landscapes. For example, our mountains offer beautiful vistas from their summits, which are perfect for peaceful photos and lasting memories.

× Yes, I like taking different picture pictures as umm, we with my family, umm, rarely, uh, visiting different countries where we can see uh, the most beautiful part of the world.

✓ Yes, I like taking different pictures when I travel with my family; we rarely visit many countries where we can see the most beautiful parts of the world.

The original sentence has repetition ('picture pictures'), fragmented clauses and missing verbs causing sentence structure errors. Combine ideas into clear clauses, use plural 'pictures' to match 'different', supply 'when I travel' to show time and a verb, and make noun phrases plural ('parts of the world') for natural English. Suggestions: remove filler words, avoid repetition, use clear clause connectors like 'when' and punctuation to separate ideas.

× And I like to take pictures of this as it brings me memories when I can look at later.

✓ And I like to take pictures of these places because they bring back memories when I look at them later.

'This' does not agree with plural 'pictures' and 'brings me memories' is awkward; 'they bring back memories' matches plural subject. Also include the object 'them' after 'look at' and remove unnecessary 'can'. Suggestions: match pronouns to nouns in number and use natural collocations like 'bring back memories'.

× In different countries, I prefer some different views.

✓ In different countries, I prefer different kinds of views.

'Some different views' is awkward; replace with 'different kinds of views' to show variety. Preposition 'in' is fine; improve noun phrase for natural expression.

× For example, in countries such as New York where I was with my, where I was with my family, I liked an urban area as there are a lot of different activities where you can take pictures and memorize it.

✓ For example, in places like New York, where I was with my family, I liked the urban areas because there are many activities where you can take pictures and remember the experience.

Sentence contains repetition ('where I was with my'), incorrect article use ('an urban area' -> 'the urban areas' or 'urban areas'), and 'memorize it' is wrong verb choice. Use 'remember the experience' or 'capture memories'. Remove repetitions and choose correct articles and verbs.

× In my country I prefer UMM. Uh views like in rural area as there are a lot of beautiful mountains with and the most beautiful views on the top of the mountain.

✓ In my country I prefer views in rural areas because there are many beautiful mountains and the most stunning views are at the top of the mountains.

Use plural 'views in rural areas' and 'mountains' to match quantity. 'The top of the mountain' is generic; use plural or 'the tops of the mountains'. Replace fillers and incorrect article usage. Suggestions: choose appropriate articles and plural forms to match context and avoid filler sounds.