Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and add one specific reason or example. Use linking words for coherence. Pronunciation and sentence structure need improvement so the meaning is clear.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me see familiar scenes from new perspectives. For example, photographing a park at sunrise and at midday shows how light changes the mood. This variety keeps photography interesting for me.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference sentence, then explain with specific reasons. Avoid filler words (uh) and unclear phrases like "new flashing" or "awful stars." Use linking words (because, so, for example) and correct grammar (I prefer rural areas).

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because the natural scenery is calmer and more photogenic. For example, I like photographing fields and mountains early in the morning when mist and soft light create a peaceful atmosphere. This helps me relax and capture unique images.

Suggestion: Answer directly (state preference) and give clear, relevant reasons and examples. Avoid unclear phrases ("with you", "exotic customers", "test have a good test food"). Mention specific differences you enjoy abroad and provide a concise example. Improve sentence structure and vocabulary.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because traveling lets me see different cultures and landscapes. For instance, when I visit Thailand with my wife and children, we enjoy the colorful markets and unique street food, which create memorable photo opportunities.

× Yes, I think take a picture in different use, which is very interesting.

✓ Yes, I think taking pictures in different places is very interesting.

The original sentence has incorrect verb form and sentence structure. 'Think take a picture' should use the gerund 'taking' after 'think' when describing a general activity. 'In different use' is unclear; replace with 'in different places' to convey varied locations. Also pluralize 'picture' to 'pictures' to match the general activity. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× The affairs you can look, look at one thing in different perspectives.

✓ You can look at things from different perspectives.

The phrase 'The affairs you can look' is ungrammatical and 'look at one thing in different perspectives' is awkward. Use the verb 'look at' plus plural 'things' for a general statement. Use the preposition 'from' with 'different perspectives' to show viewpoint. This fixes sentence structure and preposition use. Grammar problem type ID: 2,11,26

× I'm prefer using rural area areas because unlike the uh nature we use and it give me new flashing.

✓ I prefer rural areas because being in nature gives me a fresh feeling.

'I'm prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' alone is correct for present simple. 'Using rural area areas' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'rural areas'. 'Unlike the uh nature we use' is unclear; 'being in nature' conveys the intended meaning. 'It give' should be 'it gives' to agree with singular subject, and 'new flashing' is wrong word choice — 'a fresh feeling' or 'a refreshing feeling' is appropriate. Grammar problem type ID: 2,6,11,13,27

× And let me forgot some awful stars.

✓ It helps me forget about some bad experiences.

The clause 'And let me forgot' uses incorrect verb form: after 'let' the base verb is used ('forget'), but the intended meaning is that the activity causes forgetting, so 'helps me forget' is better. 'Some awful stars' is likely a wrong phrase; replace with 'some bad experiences' to make sense. Ensure present tense consistency with 'helps'. Grammar problem type ID:5,6,13,26

× Yes, I prefer with you in other countries unlike experience different exotic customers and behaviors.

✓ Yes, I prefer visiting other countries because I can experience different cultures and customs.

'Prefer with you in other countries' is ungrammatical; use 'prefer visiting other countries'. 'Unlike experience different exotic customers and behaviors' is nonsensical; likely intended 'experience different cultures and customs'. Replace 'customers' with 'cultures' and 'behaviors' with 'customs' for correct meaning. Also add 'because' to connect reason. Grammar problem type ID:11,26,13

× For example, I always take my wife and children to Thailand test have a good test food.

✓ For example, I always take my wife and children to Thailand to enjoy good food.

The original repeats 'test' and misorders words. Use 'to Thailand to enjoy good food' to express purpose. 'Always take' is fine in present simple for habitual action. Remove extraneous 'test' words and use 'enjoy' as correct verb for experiencing food. Grammar problem type ID:6,26,13