Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and avoid filler words (e.g., “uh”). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep the answer within 2–4 sentences and correct minor grammar (e.g., “good and beautiful sceneries” → “beautiful scenery”).

Example: Yes, I love taking photos of different views, especially natural scenery because it relaxes me. For example, I often photograph sunsets and waterfalls and then post a few favorites on social media, which is why my phone storage fills up quickly.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly and avoid contradicting statements (you said you prefer urban views but then described rural/natural benefits). Use one clear preference, give two coherent reasons with linking words, and correct grammar (e.g., “The Greens gives” → “Green spaces give”).

Example: I prefer rural views because green spaces help me relax and clear my mind. For instance, walking in the countryside lets me connect with nature and think calmly, so I visit parks and forests whenever I can.

Suggestion: Combine sentences to avoid fragments and be direct about your preference. Use linking words (e.g., “although,” “but,” “because”) and complete ideas. Add a specific example of where you’d like to go or what you hope to see to make the answer more concrete.

Example: Although my country has many beautiful natural sites, I prefer visiting other countries because I want to experience different cultures and landscapes. For example, I would love to see the fjords in Norway and learn about local traditions while photographing the scenery.

× That's why actually my phone is now on a full storage because of the.

✓ That's why, actually, my phone is now full because of it.

The original sentence uses 'on a full storage' which is incorrect article and noun usage. Use 'full' as adjective describing the phone storage: 'my phone is now full' and include the object 'it' to complete the clause. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: say 'my phone is now full because of it' or 'my phone is now full because of all the photos.'

× The Greens gives me peace and a lot of really to connect with nature since it's really peaceful.

✓ The green spaces give me peace and a lot of time to connect with nature since they're really peaceful.

Multiple issues: 'Greens' is an odd noun here; 'green spaces' or 'the greens' (rare) is better. The subject is plural, so the verb must be 'give' not 'gives' (subject-verb agreement). 'a lot of really to connect' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'a lot of time to connect.' Use 'they're' to refer back to the plural 'green spaces.' Suggestion: use clear noun 'green spaces' and match plural verbs and pronouns.

× Yes, I do love taking pictures of different views, especially natural spots, uh, with good and beautiful sceneries or extraordinary views.

✓ Yes, I do love taking pictures of different views, especially natural spots with beautiful scenery or extraordinary views.

Redundant and awkward phrases: 'good and beautiful sceneries' is repetitive and 'scenery' is uncountable so 'sceneries' is incorrect in this context. 'Uh' is a filler; remove in formal answer. Use 'beautiful scenery' or 'scenic views.' This fixes noun count and improves clarity.

× I love to document it, post it on social media.

✓ I love to document them and post them on social media.

Pronoun reference: 'it' does not agree with plural 'pictures' or 'views.' Use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to the photos. Also combine into a smoother compound verb phrase 'document them and post them.'

× I prefer views from urban areas rather than the rural areas because I love natural sceneries and it gives me peace.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas rather than rural areas because I love natural scenery and it gives me peace.

Use 'in urban areas' (more natural) and drop 'the' before 'rural areas' unless specific. 'Natural scenery' is an uncountable noun; use singular. The verb 'gives' refers to 'natural scenery' (singular) OK; ensure noun form is correct. Suggestion: 'I prefer views in urban areas rather than rural ones because I love natural scenery and it gives me peace.'

× Though I found my country beautiful, filled with beautiful natural resources and spots.

✓ Although I find my country beautiful and filled with natural attractions,

Sentence fragment: the original is a dependent clause ending with a period, creating a sentence without a main clause. Also tense and word choice: use 'Although I find' (present tense to match the next clause) and 'natural attractions' instead of 'natural resources and spots' for natural phrasing. Finish the thought or connect to the next sentence.

× However, I want to explore more from the other country.

✓ However, I want to explore other countries more.

'Explore more from the other country' is awkward and ungrammatical. Use 'explore other countries more' or 'explore more of other countries.' This corrects preposition and noun phrase structure to express intent clearly.

× I love to travel to new places, explore different cultures and places, and meet different people with.

✓ I love to travel to new places, explore different cultures, and meet different people.

The phrase ends with a dangling preposition 'with' and repeats 'places.' Remove the extra 'with' and redundant 'places.' Keep parallel verb forms and a complete sentence. Suggestion: '...and meet different people' completes the list correctly.