Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, to be very honest), and vary vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and limit to 3–4 sentences. Also correct plural and article errors (e.g., "a memories" → "memories" or "a memory").

Example: Yes. I really enjoy photographing different views, especially natural scenes. For example, I always carry my camera when I travel so I can capture sunsets, mountains and the ocean. These photos help me remember my trips and the peaceful moments I experienced.

Suggestion: Provide a direct topic sentence stating your preference or that you like both, then give two clear contrasting reasons using linking words (for example, 'on one hand... on the other hand'). Avoid repetition and small grammatical mistakes (e.g., plural/ article agreement). Keep to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

Example: I enjoy both urban and rural views for different reasons. On one hand, urban scenes offer dramatic architecture and vibrant city life that make striking photos; on the other hand, rural areas provide peaceful landscapes and farms that are great for relaxed family outings.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion (either preference or 'no preference') then support it with specific reasons and examples. Avoid vague phrases and repetitions, and correct subject-verb agreement ('views... are different'). Use one cohesive linking phrase (e.g., 'for example' or 'because') to connect ideas and limit to 3 sentences.

Example: I don't have a strong preference because every country offers unique views. For example, my home country has diverse landscapes I know well, while here in Canada I enjoy different species of plants and the distinctive atmosphere. Because of these differences, I like photographing nature both at home and abroad.

× I like to take picture of different views.

✓ I like to take pictures of different views.

Countable noun 'picture' needs plural 'pictures' when referring to more than one; use 'pictures' to match 'different views'. Suggestion: Use plural for countable nouns when speaking about multiple items.

× I like to capture those pictures as a memories in my phone or in my camera.

✓ I like to capture those pictures as memories on my phone or in my camera.

The phrase 'a memories' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'memories' without 'a'. Also preposition 'in' is acceptable but 'on my phone' is more natural. Suggestion: Remove the article before a plural noun and choose the correct preposition.

× I usually travel a lot. I like the natural views.

✓ I usually travel a lot. I like natural views.

The definite article 'the' makes 'natural views' sound specific; general preference uses no article. Suggestion: Omit 'the' when speaking generally about a category.

× I always take my camera with me to capture the static views, the sunset, mountains and the ocean.

✓ I always take my camera with me to capture still views, the sunset, the mountains and the ocean.

'Static views' is awkward; 'still views' or simply 'scenery' is more natural. Also when listing nouns, articles can be consistently applied: 'the sunset, the mountains and the ocean.' Suggestion: Use natural collocations like 'still views' or 'scenery' and be consistent with articles in lists.

× Well, I like both urban areas views and the rural area views.

✓ Well, I like both urban area views and rural area views.

The original mixes plural and singular forms irregularly. Use consistent noun forms: 'urban area views' and 'rural area views' or better 'views of urban areas and rural areas.' Suggestion: Keep number agreement consistent or rephrase: 'views of urban and rural areas.'

× So because both of them have the different perspectives.

✓ Both of them have different perspectives.

Starting with 'So because' is redundant and ungrammatical in this context. Remove 'So' and 'the' before 'different perspectives.' Suggestion: Use a single conjunction or start simply: 'Both have different perspectives.'

× So in the urban area you can see the tall buildings, even you can capture them and but in the rural areas you can find the peace, the old farms and where you can travel with your family as well.

✓ In urban areas you can see tall buildings and capture them, but in rural areas you can find peace, old farms and places to travel with your family.

Sentence contained redundant connectors ('and but'), incorrect article use ('the tall buildings' -> 'tall buildings'), and awkward clause 'where you can travel with your family.' Rephrase for parallel structure and clarity: use 'but' for contrast and list items cleanly. Suggestion: Keep parallel structure and avoid combining 'and' with 'but.'

× Well, the views in each country is different.

✓ Well, the views in each country are different.

Subject 'the views' is plural; verb should be plural 'are' not 'is.' Suggestion: Ensure verb agrees with the subject number.

× It depends upon the country to country.

✓ It depends from country to country.

Idiomatic expression is 'from country to country' or 'from one country to another.' 'Depends upon' is possible but 'depends from' or 'depends on' is preferred: 'It depends from country to country' or 'It depends on the country.' Suggestion: Use established idioms like 'from country to country' or 'depends on the country.'

× Like in my country there are many views.

✓ For example, in my country there are many views.

Grammatical issue is minor; original 'Like' used as filler is informal. Change to 'For example' for clarity. 'There are many views' is fine. Suggestion: Use 'For example' or 'In my country' to introduce examples.

× I like even here in Canada, I like many views.

✓ Even here in Canada, I like many views.

Comma placement and word order: move 'even' before 'here' and remove extra comma splice by making one sentence. Suggestion: Use 'Even here in Canada' at the start and combine clauses properly.

× I really love nature. So nature is different always because, uh, in each country we have different species of animals and plants and atmosphere as well.

✓ I really love nature. Nature is always different because in each country we have different species of animals and plants and different climates as well.

Avoid starting a sentence with 'So' after a full stop unless stylistically intended. 'Different species' is fine; 'atmosphere' is ambiguous—'climate' or 'environment' is better. Also adverb placement: 'always different' is more natural than 'different always.' Suggestion: Use 'always' before adjective and choose precise nouns like 'climate' or 'environment.'