Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid irrelevant info, correct grammar (e.g. "I'm a football person" is unclear), and vary vocabulary. Use one or two supporting details with linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing nature because I find peaceful scenes inspiring, so I often capture landscapes on my phone and share the best shots on social media.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer then support it with clear reasons and one specific example. Reduce hesitation and filler words. Use linking words (e.g. "however", "because") for coherence and keep sentences concise.

Example: I like both urban and rural views, but I usually prefer rural areas because they are quieter and offer more natural scenery. For example, I often visit nearby countryside to photograph misty fields and trees because they make more striking photos than city streets.

Suggestion: Answer directly and briefly, avoid vague or incorrect phrases (e.g. "depends upon a company"). Give a clear preference or say you have no strong preference, then provide a specific reason and an example. Use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar.

Example: I don't have a strong preference between views in my country and those abroad because every place has unique scenery. However, I tend to seek natural landscapes wherever I travel; for instance, I loved photographing coastal cliffs when I visited another region last year.

× Yes, of course. I'm football person.

✓ Yes, of course. I'm a football person.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before the countable noun phrase 'football person'. In English, singular countable nouns generally require an article (a/an/the). Use 'a' because this is a non-specific singular noun. Suggestion: include 'a' before singular countable nouns (e.g., 'I'm a football fan').

× I used to do the static photography and post it to social media.

✓ I used to do still photography and post it on social media.

'Static photography' is an uncommon collocation; 'still photography' is the natural term. Also, the preposition should be 'on social media' rather than 'to'. The verb structure 'used to do' is correct for past habit. Suggestion: use established collocations and correct prepositions ('post on social media').

× So whenever I go outside, I usually like the nature views.

✓ So whenever I go outside, I usually like natural views.

The noun phrase 'the nature views' uses an incorrect definite article and unnatural word order. 'Nature views' or 'natural views' is more idiomatic; drop 'the' unless referring to specific views. Suggestion: use 'natural views' or 'views of nature' without 'the' for general statements.

× I always capture them in my camera or in my phone and I post them on social media.

✓ I always capture them with my camera or on my phone, and I post them on social media.

Use 'with my camera' and 'on my phone' to indicate the device used. 'In my camera' is incorrect preposition. Also add a comma before 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'with' for tools/devices and 'on' for screens/platforms.

× Uh, actually I like both of the views.

✓ Uh, actually I like both views.

Use 'both views' rather than 'both of the views' for a general preference. 'Both of the views' implies specific views already mentioned; here it's general. Suggestion: use 'both' + plural noun without 'of' when speaking generally.

× It depends upon the situation and the, and the view.

✓ It depends on the situation and the view.

The idiomatic preposition is 'depend on' (or 'depend upon' is possible but less common). The repeated 'and the' is redundant. Suggestion: use 'depend on' and avoid unnecessary repetition.

× I usually go in the rural areas to, uh, like, uh, I like the peace over there.

✓ I usually go to rural areas because I like the peace there.

Use 'go to' for destination, not 'go in'. 'The rural areas' is acceptable but 'rural areas' is more natural. 'I like the peace over there' is wordy; 'I like the peace there' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'go to' + place and simplify clauses.

× So I like nature. I like to capture those views in my cameras.

✓ So I like nature. I like to capture those views with my camera.

'In my cameras' is incorrect: use singular 'my camera' or plural only if owning multiple; the preposition should be 'with'. Also 'those views' is fine if referring to previously mentioned views. Suggestion: use 'with my camera' for device and keep number consistent.

× Like we can't compare any country with other one because all the countries have their different views and different nature and different religions.

✓ We can't compare one country with another because all countries have different landscapes, natures, and religions.

Original sentence uses awkward pronouns and articles: 'any country with other one' is incorrect. Use 'one' and 'another' to compare two items. Also 'their different views' is ambiguous; 'different landscapes' or 'natural features' is clearer. 'All countries' without 'the' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'one...another' for comparisons and choose precise nouns.

× So it depends upon a company, a country.

✓ So it depends on the country.

'Depends on' is the idiomatic form. 'A company, a country' is confusing and unnecessary. Likely the speaker meant 'on the country' or 'on the company', but in context 'country' is enough. Suggestion: use 'depends on' and remove extraneous words.

× I usually like the natural views.

✓ I usually like natural views.

Adding 'the' makes the statement sound like it refers to specific views; for a general preference, omit 'the'. Suggestion: use the bare plural for general preferences ('I like natural views').

× So whatever the country doesn't matter.

✓ So the country doesn't matter.

'So whatever the country doesn't matter' is ungrammatical and redundant. The intended meaning is 'the country doesn't matter' or 'it doesn't matter which country'. Suggestion: use 'the country doesn't matter' or 'it doesn't matter which country' for clarity.

× I always want to capture the views.

✓ I always want to capture views.

'The views' implies specific views; in general, 'capture views' or 'capture those views' (if referring back) is better. Suggestion: choose definite article only when referring to previously mentioned specific views.