Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and avoid fillers (uh, well). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail with a time reference. Use correct tense and smoother linking words (for example, recently). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, a couple of months ago I took many pictures of the mountains while on holiday, and I shared them with my friends afterwards.

Suggestion: Provide a clear preference sentence, correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Give one specific reason and a short comparison using linking words (because, whereas). Limit to 2–3 sentences and use more appropriate vocabulary (crowded, noisy, scenic).

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because they are more natural and scenic. Urban areas are often crowded and noisy, whereas the countryside offers peaceful landscapes that are better for photography.

Suggestion: Start with a direct answer (I prefer...), give two specific reasons (variety and cost), and use correct comparative phrasing. Use linking words (for example, because, also) and avoid repeating phrases. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer taking photos in my own country because it has a wide variety of sights, from historical sites to beautiful mountains. Also, traveling abroad can be expensive, so staying local makes photography trips more practical.

× for example, a couple of months ago, uh, I take lots of pictures of mountains when I was on holidays.

✓ For example, a couple of months ago, I took lots of pictures of mountains when I was on holiday.

The sentence refers to a completed past action, so the verb should be in the simple past (took), not base form (take). Use 'on holiday' (singular) for the phrase. Suggestion: use simple past for actions completed at a specific time in the past. Grammar problem type ID: 9

× Well most of time we can the best views in rural areas because of their looking natural and beautiful as compared to the urban areas.

✓ Well, most of the time we can find the best views in rural areas because they look more natural and beautiful compared to urban areas.

Errors: missing article 'the' in 'most of the time' (article use), incorrect word order 'we can the best views' should be 'we can find the best views', incorrect pronoun 'their looking' should be 'they look' (pronoun + verb agreement) and comparative phrasing 'more natural and beautiful' is needed. Suggestion: use 'most of the time', include a verb like 'find', use 'they' to refer to 'rural areas', and use comparative form 'more'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Well if you talk about the urban areas the the IT is very crowded places so it's very unnecessary to take pictures.

✓ Well, if you talk about urban areas, they are very crowded places, so it's usually unnecessary to take pictures.

Errors: redundant 'the the', incorrect article 'the IT', and wrong pronoun. Use 'urban areas' without 'the' for general meaning, use 'they are' to refer back, and 'usually unnecessary' is more natural. Suggestion: remove duplicate words, choose correct pronoun for plural noun, and avoid 'the' before general plural nouns. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Well, in my country, there are lots of places, uh, which some are historical places, some are naturally beautiful like mountains.

✓ Well, in my country there are lots of places: some are historical, and some are naturally beautiful, like mountains.

Original uses redundant 'which' and awkward structure. Use a clearer coordinate clause 'some are ... and some are ...'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary relative pronoun and simplify parallel structure for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× So in my country, uh, we can take lots of pictures as compared to the another country.

✓ So in my country we can take lots of pictures compared to another country.

Use of definite article 'the' before 'another country' is incorrect; 'another' already implies indefiniteness. Also 'as compared to' is wordy; use 'compared to'. Suggestion: remove 'the' and use simpler comparative phrase. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× So it can be costly if we go to the another country to take pictures.

✓ So it can be costly if we go to another country to take pictures.

'The another country' is incorrect; 'another' should not be preceded by 'the'. Suggestion: remove 'the' when using 'another'. Grammar problem type ID: 22