Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise, avoid fillers (umm, uh), correct word choice, and provide a clearer reason with one supporting detail. Keep to a natural 1–3 sentence answer and use a linking phrase if adding a reason.

Example: Not really. I'm not a big fan of taking photos because I prefer to remember special views in my mind rather than keep digital pictures. For example, when I visit a famous place I focus on the experience instead of photographing everything.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence, correct minor language errors (remove extra word 'home'), and organize supporting details with linking words. Be specific about why the combination of sounds and sights appeals to you.

Example: I prefer urban views because the city feels energetic. For instance, I enjoy hearing birds and traffic in the morning and seeing tall skyscrapers, which together make me feel awake and motivated.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence, remove fillers, fix grammar (e.g., 'a very famous one called the Great Wall'), and add a specific reason and one short supporting detail. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer views in my own country, especially around Beijing. For example, the Great Wall is breathtaking and historically important, so visiting it feels more meaningful to me than sights abroad.

× No, I don't like to take pictures of different views because umm, I'm not a big fan of taking pictures, umm, and uh, I'd rather put the muse, the significant views into my brain rather than on pictures.

✓ No, I don't like taking pictures of different views because I'm not a big fan of photography, and I'd rather put the memorable or significant views in my memory rather than on pictures.

The sentence contains incorrect word choices and awkward structure. 'I don't like to take pictures' is grammatically acceptable but 'I don't like taking pictures' is more natural (gerund use). 'Put the muse' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'put in my memory' or 'remember'. Use 'memorable or significant views' rather than 'the significant views' for clarity. Also replace 'on pictures' with 'in pictures' or better 'on film', but here 'in my memory' contrasts correctly. Remove filler words for fluent speech.

× I prefer views in urban areas home because every day I wake up in the morning, I hear the sound of birds and the cars and I can see the skyscrapers, so it makes me feel alive.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas at home because every morning when I wake up I hear the sounds of birds and cars and I can see the skyscrapers, so it makes me feel alive.

Several issues: 'home' placement is awkward; use 'at home' after phrase. 'Every day I wake up in the morning' is redundant; 'every morning when I wake up' is concise. 'The sound of birds and the cars' has incorrect articles and number: use plural 'sounds of birds and cars'. Remove unnecessary definite articles. Maintain consistent tense and natural word order.

× I prefer the views in my own country home because I live in China and in Beijing, umm, there's a very famous called, uh, the Great Wall of China.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country because I live in China; near Beijing there is a very famous site, the Great Wall of China.

This sentence has structural problems and misplaced words. 'Country home' is incorrect here; use 'my own country'. 'There's a very famous called' lacks a noun after 'famous' and misplaces 'called'. Use 'a very famous site, the Great Wall of China' or 'the very famous Great Wall of China'. Also clarify location: say 'near Beijing' if appropriate. Maintain clear noun phrases and correct verb placement.

× And the Great Wall of China has a long history, umm, and it has a magnificent sight.

✓ The Great Wall of China has a long history and is a magnificent sight.

Awkward phrasing: 'has a magnificent sight' is incorrect because 'sight' is something seen; a landmark 'is a magnificent sight'. Combine clauses to avoid repetition ('and it has' -> 'and is'). Keep adjective 'magnificent' directly modifying 'sight'.