Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear and concise: start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), use correct grammar, avoid filler words, and give one specific supporting detail. Keep sentences to a maximum of five and use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I do enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me see familiar places from new perspectives. For example, I like photographing city skylines at sunset because the changing light makes the buildings look dramatic, and it helps me practice composition and color.

Suggestion: Answer directly (I prefer rural/urban) and then give one or two specific reasons using clearer vocabulary and correct grammar. Use linking words like because and for example, and avoid vague phrases and repetition.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and have cleaner air. For example, I enjoy photographing fields and forests where there are fewer cars and I can capture natural light and peaceful landscapes.

Suggestion: Start with a direct statement and give a balanced answer: say whether you prefer home or abroad and explain why. Use accurate vocabulary (countries, cultures, landscapes) and give a clear example of what attracts you to foreign views. Avoid incorrect verbs and repetition.

Example: I appreciate views in my own country because they are familiar and meaningful to me, but I would also like to visit other countries to see different landscapes and cultures. For instance, I want to photograph European cities for their historic architecture and Southeast Asia for its vibrant markets and tropical scenery.

× Well, actually I'm from a personal my viewpoint.

✓ Well, actually, from my personal viewpoint,

The original sentence uses redundant and incorrectly ordered words ('from a personal my viewpoint'). This is an adjective order and possessive pronoun issue. Use 'from my personal viewpoint' to place the possessive before the adjective and noun. Also add commas for clarity.

× I touch that I'm really like to take the picture in different rules, of course, because you can see the the whole picture in different ways and gets a lot of, you know, attractive for looking.

✓ I think that I really like taking pictures of different scenes, of course, because you can see the whole scene in different ways and it becomes much more attractive to look at.

Multiple errors: 'touch' is incorrect verb choice and should be 'think' (vocabulary). 'I'm really like to take the picture' mixes verb forms; after 'like' use gerund 'taking' or 'I really like to take pictures'. 'Different rules' is wrong word choice; 'scenes' or 'settings' fits. 'Gets a lot of attractive for looking' has subject-verb and adjective/adverb problems; use 'it becomes much more attractive to look at'. Corrections fix verb forms, subject-verb agreement, and adjective/adverb placement.

× Well, as a citizens, I'm prefer to go to another some kind of, you know, rural areas, just take a a atmophilus without pollutions of vehicles and also to feel the weathers in that signs.

✓ Well, as a citizen, I prefer to go to rural areas, to enjoy the atmosphere without vehicle pollution and to feel the weather there.

Errors corrected: 'as a citizens' — incorrect number and article; use singular 'a citizen' or plural without 'a'. 'I'm prefer' mixes contraction and verb; use 'I prefer' (present simple for habits). 'another some kind of' is redundant; use 'rural areas'. 'atmophilus' is misspelled; use 'atmosphere'. 'pollutions of vehicles' should be 'vehicle pollution' (uncountable noun). 'feel the weathers in that signs' is unclear; use 'feel the weather there'. This fixes articles, subject-verb form, prepositions, and noun choice.

× Well, I really love my countries so but I would like to come to another country to sell the the views like in Europe and some in South Asians.

✓ Well, I really love my country, but I would like to visit other countries to see views like those in Europe and in South Asia.

Errors: 'my countries' likely should be singular 'my country' if speaker refers to their own nation. 'so but' is redundant; use 'but'. 'come to another country to sell the the views' — 'sell' is wrong verb; use 'visit' and 'see' the views. 'some in South Asians' is incorrect; use 'in South Asia'. Also remove duplicate 'the'. This fixes pronoun/number, article use, verb choice, and region name.

× It's a lot a lot of different culture, so their views is made different from.

✓ There are a lot of different cultures, so their views are different.

Multiple agreement errors: use 'There are' for plural 'cultures'. 'a lot a lot of different culture' should be 'a lot of different cultures'. 'their views is' should be 'their views are' to match plural subject. 'made different from' is awkward; simplify to 'are different'. This fixes subject-verb agreement and plurality.