Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (động từ và cấu trúc câu), dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và rút ngắn câu để tự nhiên hơn; thêm chi tiết cụ thể bằng liên từ phù hợp. Ví dụ: sửa 'I really like take a photo' thành 'I really like taking photos', thay 'it can keep my memory' bằng 'it helps me remember the trip' và tránh lặp từ như 'somewhere' và 'beautiful place' cùng lúc.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I like taking pictures because they help me remember special moments when I travel with friends, and they also let me capture beautiful scenery to look back on later.

Suggestion: Cải thiện tính mạch lạc và hoàn chỉnh câu; dùng liên từ để trình bày hai ý trái ngược rõ ràng và sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'it depends on my mood', 'if I’m happy/relaxed'). Tránh tiếng lóng quá nhiều và hoàn thành ý thay vì bỏ dở câu.

Example: It depends on my mood. If I'm feeling energetic, I prefer urban areas because there are many attractions and entertainment options. But if I want peace and quiet, I choose rural areas for their calm atmosphere and natural scenery.

Suggestion: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và trật tự từ; đưa ra lý do cụ thể hơn bằng linking words (because, so) và thêm ví dụ minh họa. Ví dụ: 'I prefer views in my own country because I know the best spots and can plan trips easily.'

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with the locations and can visit the best spots without much planning. For example, I know a nearby coastal town with stunning sunsets that I often return to.

× I really like take a photo because it can keep my memory when I go to somewhere with my friend or it's so simple like beautiful place.

✓ I really like taking photos because they can preserve my memories when I go somewhere with my friends or when I visit a beautiful place.

Use gerund after 'like' (Verb + -ing form). Use plural 'photos' and 'friends' for general statements (singular/plural). 'Keep my memory' is unnatural; use 'preserve my memories'. 'Go to somewhere' should be 'go somewhere'. Use 'they' to refer back to photos and 'visit a beautiful place' is clearer. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I think it depend on my mood.

✓ I think it depends on my mood.

Subject-verb agreement in present simple: 'it' (third person singular) requires the verb with -s ('depends'). Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Uh, you are happy. I wanna go to urban area to see everything at there is very have it have too much of entertainment and I can enjoy it, but if I feel.

✓ If I am happy, I want to go to urban areas to see everything there because they have too much entertainment and I can enjoy it, but if I feel otherwise...

Pronoun and reference corrections: 'If I am happy' replaces wrongly addressed 'you are happy'. Use 'want' instead of colloquial 'wanna' for formality. Use plural 'urban areas' for generalization. Remove 'at' before 'there'. 'They have too much entertainment' refers to urban areas. Sentence was incomplete; 'if I feel otherwise' makes it a complete contrasting clause. Also used present simple for habitual preference. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I think my country because I know my country, I know where have beautiful view and I can go through exactly where I want.

✓ I prefer my country because I know it; I know where the beautiful sights are and I can go exactly where I want.

Preposition and word choice: 'prefer my country' fits the question. Use 'it' to avoid repetition. 'Where have beautiful view' is incorrect word order; change to 'where the beautiful sights are'. 'Go through exactly where I want' is incorrect: 'go exactly where I want' is correct. Also use plural 'sights' or 'views'. Grammar problem type ID: 11