Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct minor errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one brief reason and a specific example. Use linking words (for example, however) and correct tense/grammar (e.g., 'I usually forget'). Avoid filler sounds like 'Umm'.

Example: Not really. I prefer to enjoy the moment rather than take photos because stopping to frame shots interrupts my experience. For example, when I visited a national park last year, I chose to walk and admire the scenery instead of taking pictures, which made the trip more relaxing.

Suggestion: Organize into a clear topic sentence and one or two specific contrasts using linking words (e.g., 'on the one hand/on the other hand'). Fix minor errors ('tall build buildings' → 'tall buildings'; remove repeated words). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Example: It depends. On the one hand, I enjoy urban views for their tall buildings and bright lights because they feel energetic; on the other hand, I appreciate rural scenery for its peacefulness and wide open spaces. Both have their own unique beauty, so my preference changes with my mood.

Suggestion: Begin with a direct answer, then give a clear reason and a specific example. Avoid repetition ('other countries' repeated; 'country of my country' unclear) and correct grammar ('architectures' → 'architecture'; 'it's very unique' → 'they are very distinctive'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer architectural styles and landscapes that are unfamiliar to me. For example, when I visited Spain last year, the combination of historic buildings and coastal scenery felt very distinctive compared with what I see at home.

× I prefer to just enjoy the moment and I also find it a bit of a hassle to stop and take pictures and usually I forgot to anyway.

✓ I prefer to just enjoy the moment, and I also find it a bit of a hassle to stop and take pictures, and usually I forget to anyway.

The sentence mixes present tense with past tense 'forgot'. Maintain present tense: use 'forget' for habitual actions. Also add commas to separate clauses for clarity.

× Well it depends, sometimes I find city views interesting like the tall build buildings and bright lights, but other times I I just want to feel the calm of the countryside.

✓ Well, it depends. Sometimes I find city views interesting, like the tall buildings and bright lights, but other times I just want to feel the calm of the countryside.

Use correct noun form 'buildings' not 'build buildings' and remove duplicated 'I'. Add comma after 'Well' and before example phrase. No third-person verb changes here but sentence needed word correction and punctuation to match spoken present-tense statements.

× But both scenery have their own unique beauty.

✓ But both sceneries have their own unique beauty.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun; when referring to two types use 'sceneries' or rephrase 'both types of scenery'. Ensure subject and verb agree: plural subject 'sceneries' takes 'have'.

× Other countries I generally prefer the landscapes of other countries, but maybe it's because I'm already used to the views of this country of my country.

✓ I generally prefer the landscapes of other countries, but maybe it's because I'm already used to the views of my country.

Original sentence repeats 'other countries' and has awkward clause order 'Other countries I generally...'. Reorder to subject-first 'I generally prefer...' and remove redundant phrase 'of this country of my country' replacing with 'my country'.

× So whenever I travel abroad, I love seeing the different styles of architectures and it's very unique and stunning.

✓ So whenever I travel abroad, I love seeing the different styles of architecture; they are very unique and stunning.

Use uncountable noun 'architecture' not 'architectures'. Also avoid 'it's' referring to plural 'styles' — use 'they are' or rephrase. Minor punctuation change improves flow.