Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and shows enthusiasm, but it is slightly repetitive (mentions sunsets and nature sceneries twice) and a bit general. To improve, give one specific example of a place or moment you enjoyed photographing, use one linking phrase to add detail, and keep the answer to no more than 3–4 concise sentences.

Example: Yes, I love taking photos of different landscapes, especially sunsets. For example, last summer I photographed the coastline near my town at dusk, capturing the sky’s orange and purple hues. Because of the changing light, I sometimes stay for thirty minutes to get several different shots.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors, repetitions and awkward phrasing. Improve by starting with a clear topic sentence, correcting pronoun and verb forms, removing repetition, and adding a specific supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'for example').

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because they are peaceful and have cleaner air. For example, the hills near my village offer quiet walking paths and wide views at sunset, where the sky changes color each evening.

Suggestion: Your response answers the question but is repetitive and has some awkward collocations (e.g., 'make tourists attract'). To improve, give one clear reason with a specific example and use correct phrasing. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for instance' to make your point coherent, and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because the landscapes are varied and familiar. For instance, our coastal towns have long beaches and dramatic sunsets that I enjoy visiting, which I think are more relaxing than crowded foreign sights.

× Yes, I love capturing photos of different landscapes, especially the stunning views and sunsets such as nature sceneries and sunsets.

✓ Yes, I love capturing photos of different landscapes, especially stunning views and sunsets, such as natural sceneries.

The phrase 'nature sceneries' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'natural' modifying 'sceneries'. Also 'sunsets' was repeated; remove redundancy and reorder for clarity. Suggestion: use 'natural scenery' (often uncountable) or 'natural sceneries' rarely; better: 'natural scenery' or 'natural landscapes'. Use concise parallel structure when listing items. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I prefer in rural areas because they I enjoy the fresh air and peaceful atmosphere it it.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I enjoy the fresh air and peaceful atmosphere there.

The original has wrong preposition 'in' after 'prefer' and pronoun errors: 'they I' and duplicate 'it it'. 'Prefer' is followed directly by the object without 'in' when indicating a choice ('I prefer rural areas'). Use 'there' to refer back to 'rural areas'. Remove duplicated words and ensure subject pronoun 'I' is correctly positioned. Grammar problem type ID:11

× It has a gorgeous sunset with a mix of stunning colors and moods and I love the natural scenery there.

✓ They have gorgeous sunsets with a mix of stunning colors and moods, and I love the natural scenery there.

The subject refers to 'rural areas' (plural), so the pronoun and verb must be plural: use 'They have' or better rephrase to 'Rural areas have' or 'There are gorgeous sunsets'. Using 'It has' is incorrect for plural antecedent. Also 'sunset' should be plural when speaking generally. Ensure subject-verb agreement with correct pronoun number. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I prefer in my own country because it has beautiful beaches, natural scenery, gorgeous sunsets, stunning views and rural areas that make tourists attract.

✓ I prefer my own country because it has beautiful beaches, natural scenery, gorgeous sunsets, stunning views, and rural areas that attract tourists.

Again, 'prefer' should not be followed by 'in' when indicating preference for a place; say 'I prefer my own country'. The phrase 'make tourists attract' is incorrect word order and verb choice. Use the active verb 'attract' with the object 'tourists' ('attract tourists'). Also added Oxford comma for clarity. Ensure parallel list structure and correct verb usage. Grammar problem type ID:11