Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise, correct grammar, and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and use linking words (for example, because/so) to connect ideas. Also correct noun forms (picture → pictures, mountain views) and remove unclear phrases (e.g., “the series like Ivy and driving it”).

Example: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph mountain views and coastal scenes because their colors and shapes are beautiful, and I like to keep those photos as memories. Therefore, I can look back on them later and remember my trips.

Suggestion: Start with a clear, direct statement (I prefer rural views), then give specific reasons and use linking words (because, so, therefore). Fix unclear or incorrect phrases and avoid vague statements. Provide one concrete example (a place or scene) to make the answer more specific.

Example: I prefer rural views because I enjoy being surrounded by nature and trees. For example, I like photographing quiet fields and forests because they make me feel peaceful, so when I take pictures I can focus on the moment and relax.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer first (I prefer views in other countries), then explain why with specific reasons and use linking words (for example, because, so). Correct grammar (try new views → try new views; my country's → in my country) and avoid repetition. Mention a specific country or scene you want to photograph to add detail.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering different landscapes and cultures. For example, I would love to photograph the historic streets of Rome or the rice terraces in Bali, so I can make memories and look back on the unique places I have visited.

× I would love to. I really like to take picture of different views, for example, the mountains views or even the series like Ivy and driving it just so much and I just wanna capture it and as a memory. So I'll definitely finally look back on it.

✓ I would love to. I really like taking pictures of different views, for example mountain views or even scenes like ivy-covered roads and driving; I enjoy them so much and I just want to capture them as memories. So I'll definitely be able to look back on them.

The sentence uses incorrect verb forms and noun forms. 'like to take picture' should be 'like taking pictures' because 'like' followed by a verb often uses -ing for general preferences and 'picture' needs plural. 'mountains views' should be 'mountain views' (adjective form) and 'series like Ivy and driving it' is unclear; corrected to 'scenes like ivy-covered roads and driving' for meaning. 'wanna' changed to 'want to' and 'capture it as a memory' to 'capture them as memories' to match plural. Also added 'be able to' for futureability. Improve by using -ing after 'like' for habitual actions, correct noun plurality, and choose clear noun phrases.

× I prefer views on the rural areas because I love nature and who is Princess of so many trees and two weeks.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I love nature and the presence of so many trees.

Use 'in' rather than 'on' with 'rural areas'. The phrase 'who is Princess of so many trees and two weeks' is ungrammatical and likely meant 'the presence of so many trees'. Remove extraneous words and use a noun phrase 'the presence of' to describe trees. Suggestion: choose correct preposition (in rural areas) and use clear noun phrases.

× I just love everything that we can think.

✓ I just love everything that we can imagine.

'think' is not the right verb collocation here; 'imagine' fits the intended meaning. Use base verb after 'can' (can imagine). Suggestion: use verbs that collocate with 'everything we can...' such as 'imagine' or 'think of'.

× I find peace in that, so when I take picture, I can also live in the moment.

✓ I find peace in that, so when I take pictures, I can also live in the moment.

'take picture' should be plural 'take pictures' for general actions. Use plural with countable nouns in general statements. Keep tense present simple for habitual action.

× I I would love to try a new views on other countries.

✓ I would love to try new views in other countries.

Remove repeated 'I'. 'try a new views' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'new views' without 'a'. Use 'in other countries' rather than 'on' for locations. Keep 'would love to' plus base verb 'try' and plural noun consistency.

× I would definitely say a yes as my country's I've taken a lot of videos.

✓ I would definitely say yes, as in my country I've taken a lot of photos and videos.

Sentence is awkward and ungrammatical: 'say a yes' should be 'say yes'. 'as my country's I've taken' is incorrect structure; clarify with 'as in my country I've taken'. Also 'videos' may be intended as 'photos and videos'. Suggestion: restructure sentences for clear clause connection using commas and 'as' or 'because' to give reasons.

× I wanna make memories.

✓ I want to make memories.

'wanna' is informal spoken contraction; use 'want to' in standard written English. Maintain infinitive 'to make' after 'want'.

× I wanna capture those photos in other countries also.

✓ I want to capture photos in other countries as well.

Replace informal 'wanna' with 'want to'. Use 'as well' instead of 'also' at end for more natural placement; remove 'those' unless referring to previously mentioned items. Keep infinitive form 'to capture' after 'want'.

× So I'll kind of get that look back on it.

✓ So I'll be able to look back on them.

'kind of get that look back on it' is ungrammatical and informal. Use 'be able to look back on them' to express future ability to review memories; match pronoun plurality to 'photos' and use natural phrasing. Suggest restructuring vague fillers like 'kind of' for clarity.