Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is natural and relevant, but it has some minor grammatical errors and could be more concise. Reduce redundancy (e.g., ‘capture moments and remember them’ is repetitive) and fix articles and agreement (‘a scenery’ → ‘a scene’ or ‘scenery’, ‘catches my eyes’ → ‘catches my eye’). Use one linking phrase to add a brief specific example or reason.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos because it helps me capture memorable scenes. For example, I often photograph sunrise landscapes when I travel and then share the best shots with my friends to remember the trip.

Suggestion: The answer communicates your preference but contains grammatical mistakes and slightly awkward phrasing. Correct subject–verb agreement and articles (e.g., ‘I'm the kind of person who is grounded’), use more precise vocabulary (avoid ‘sceneries’; use ‘scenery’ or ‘landscapes’), and combine ideas with linking words for coherence. Add a brief specific example to support your point.

Example: I prefer rural areas because I'm the kind of person who enjoys calm surroundings; for instance, I like hiking in mountain valleys and sitting by quiet rivers where I can relax away from city noise.

Suggestion: Good content and clear reasons, but fix grammar and phrasing: use ‘a diverse range of scenery’ or ‘diverse landscapes’, and say ‘a deep connection’ rather than ‘deep connection’. Also link reasons with clearer connectives and give a specific example of a place to make it more vivid.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because China offers a diverse range of landscapes, from high mountains to nearby coastlines. I feel a deep connection to these places, and it's also cheaper to travel locally; for example, I often visit the Yellow Mountains for weekend photography trips.

× Yes, I'm really into taking photos because it is a good way to capture moments and remember them, especially when a scenery really catches my eyes.

✓ Yes, I'm really into taking photos because it is a good way to capture moments and remember them, especially when a scene really catches my eye.

Use 'scene' instead of 'scenery' for a single view and 'catch my eye' (singular) is the correct fixed expression. 'Scenery' is uncountable and 'a scenery' is incorrect; 'eyes' should be singular in the idiom.

× I often photograph landscapes and then share with my friends.

✓ I often photograph landscapes and then share them with my friends.

The verb 'share' requires an object when referring to what is shared. Include 'them' to show that the landscapes/photos are what you share.

× I prefer rural areas because I'm kind of person who are grounded so I enjoy the quiet and peaceful sceneries like mountains and rivers.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I'm the kind of person who is grounded, so I enjoy the quiet and peaceful scenery, like mountains and rivers.

Use 'the kind of person' with the article 'the'. 'Who is' agrees with singular 'person' (subject-verb agreement). 'Scenery' is uncountable, so use singular. Added a comma before 'so' for clarity.

× Urban areas are usually too crowded and full of noise. I'm not really into it.

✓ Urban areas are usually too crowded and full of noise. I'm not really into them.

Refers back to 'urban areas' (plural), so the pronoun should be plural 'them' rather than singular 'it'.

× I prefer views in my own country because China has diverse kind of sceneries from mountains to close coastlines.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because China has a diverse range of scenery, from mountains to nearby coastlines.

Use 'a diverse range of' or 'diverse' with a noun phrase for plural variety. 'Scenery' is uncountable. 'Close coastlines' is unnatural; 'nearby coastlines' is idiomatic.

× I have deep connection with them.

✓ I have a deep connection with them.

Add the article 'a' before 'deep connection' because the noun phrase requires an article.

× On top of that it is quite cheaper to visit.

✓ On top of that, it is much cheaper to visit.

'Quite cheaper' is ungrammatical; use 'much cheaper' or 'considerably cheaper'. Also add a comma after the introductory phrase 'On top of that'.