Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and organized: give a clear topic sentence, then support with 1–2 specific examples using linking words. Correct grammar (article use, word order) and avoid filler words like “uh.”

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often take pictures of lakes at sunset because the colours are vivid, and I also like close-ups of moonlit gardens since the contrast between light and shadow is striking.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (singular/plural, relative clauses).

Example: I prefer rural views to urban ones because rural areas have more greenery and natural features. For instance, there are lakes and hills that create peaceful scenes, whereas cities often have tall buildings and pollution that spoil the view.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer (e.g. ‘It depends’), then specify conditions and provide one concrete contrastive example. Improve grammar, use clearer linking words and correct noun forms.

Example: It depends on the place: I love views in India because we have lush greenery and dramatic mountain ranges, but I am also attracted to foreign countries that offer coastal landscapes or different architecture. For example, I enjoy Himalayan views at home, but I would like to photograph Mediterranean coasts abroad.

× Uh, yes, I do like taking pictures of different views, like for example, a beautiful sky in a beautiful lake and a garden area and a Half Moon that it's very fascinating for me.

✓ Uh, yes, I do like taking pictures of different views, for example, a beautiful sky, a beautiful lake, a garden, and a half moon, which I find very fascinating.

Errors: redundant phrasing ('like for example'), incorrect noun phrases ('a beautiful sky in a beautiful lake'), capitalisation ('Half Moon'), and incorrect use of 'that it's'. Correction uses parallel noun list and a relative clause with 'which I find' to express the speaker's reaction. Suggestion: use clear parallel structure when listing and use 'which I find' or 'that I find' to describe feelings about something.

× I I do prefer views in a rural area rather than urban area because in urban area there is a building and a pollution which which interfere in a view whether in rural areas there is a greenery, uh, there is a lake and upwards which.

✓ I do prefer views in rural areas rather than urban areas because in urban areas there are buildings and pollution which interfere with the view, whereas in rural areas there is greenery, a lake, and open spaces.

Errors: inconsistent singular/plural ('a rural area' vs 'urban area', 'a building' vs general buildings), repeated words ('which which'), wrong preposition ('interfere in a view'), and unclear phrase 'upwards which'. Correction uses plural forms for general statements and fixes preposition to 'interfere with'. Suggestion: use plural when speaking generally about types of areas and 'interfere with' for interference. Replace vague words with clearer terms like 'open spaces'.

× Basically it depends on the country. In my country like India there is a very scenario and mesmerising views, greenery and a mountains and also foreign countries also attracts me.

✓ Basically it depends on the country. In my country, like India, there are very scenic and mesmerising views, greenery, and mountains, and foreign countries also attract me.

Errors: subject-verb agreement and article/plural issues ('there is a very scenario' should be 'there are very scenic views'), incorrect adjective form ('scenario' vs 'scenic'), unnecessary repeated 'also', and wrong verb form 'attracts' with plural subject 'foreign countries'. Correction uses 'there are' for plural 'views', 'scenic' as the correct adjective, plural 'mountains' without extra article, and 'attract' to agree with plural subject. Suggestion: match verbs to plural subjects, choose correct adjectives, and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.