Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce repetition, make a clear topic sentence, and add one specific reason or example. Use correct phrasing and avoid filler words. For example, say why photos matter to you (memories, sharing, art) and give a brief example.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photos help me preserve memories. For instance, when I visited a mountain lake last year I took many photos so I could remember the light and colors and show them to my family.

Suggestion: Use correct comparative structures and avoid repeating words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and a short example. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" and correct verb forms.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas rather than urban ones because the countryside feels peaceful and less crowded. For example, I like walking by rice fields where the quiet and fresh air help me relax.

Suggestion: Respond with a complete sentence and explain your preference with specific details. Avoid vague phrases and sentence fragments. Mention what kinds of scenery in Japan you like and why, using linking words like "however" or "also."

Example: I like views in both my country and abroad, but I prefer those in Japan because it offers a wide variety of scenery. For example, Japan has beautiful coastlines, mountain landscapes, and traditional gardens, so I can enjoy many different kinds of views without traveling far.

× Yes, I take pictures of different views because I I want to keep the views more memorable.

✓ Yes, I take pictures of different views because I want to make the memories of those views last.

Errors: repeated word 'I', awkward phrase 'keep the views more memorable'. This fits sentence structure errors (ID 26). Remove the duplicate 'I' and replace 'keep the views more memorable' with a natural English expression such as 'make the memories of those views last' or 'preserve the memories'. Suggestion: read sentences aloud to catch repetition and prefer 'make memories last' or 'preserve memories'.

× I prefer views in rural areas than in urban areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas.

Using 'prefer ... than' is incorrect; English uses 'prefer A to B'. Also 'views in urban areas' should be referenced concisely as 'those in urban areas' to avoid repetition. This error matches incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11). Suggestion: use 'prefer A to B' and use pronouns like 'those' to avoid repetition.

× It's because rural views in rural areas gives gives me a sense of relax.

✓ It's because rural views give me a sense of relaxation.

Problems: repetition 'gives gives', incorrect verb number 'gives' with plural subject 'rural views' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27), and wrong word form 'relax' instead of the noun 'relaxation' (word form/choice, treated here under sentence structure but primary is subject-verb agreement). Correct plural subject takes plural verb 'give'. Use the noun 'relaxation' or adjective 'relaxed' as appropriate. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with subject number and choose correct noun/adjective forms (e.g., 'a sense of relaxation' or 'a relaxed feeling').

× Views in both. Places are good, but I prefer using my country because Japan has a variety of. Charm.

✓ I like views in both, but I prefer those in my own country because Japan has a variety of charms.

Multiple issues: sentence fragments ('Views in both.', 'Places are good.'), awkward 'prefer using my country', and improper punctuation 'variety of. Charm.' These are sentence structure errors (ID 26). Combine ideas into a single coherent sentence, replace 'using my country' with 'those in my own country', and correct 'variety of charms' (no period between 'of' and 'Charm'). Suggestion: join fragments, use 'both' with a clear noun ('views in both'), and use plural 'charms' after 'variety of'.