Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar, and use linking words for variety. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and include a specific example to make it vivid.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I often photograph sunsets and striking landscapes whenever I travel because the colours and light are captivating. For example, last month I took several photos of a lake at sunset, which showed beautiful reflections and warm tones.

Suggestion: Give a direct preference sentence, correct grammatical errors, use linking words to contrast urban and rural, and provide one specific reason or example. Keep it short and coherent.

Example: I prefer rural views because I grew up in the countryside and enjoy open spaces and natural scenery. However, I also appreciate urban views for their architecture and lively streets; for instance, city skylines at night can be very impressive.

Suggestion: Answer directly whether you prefer one or not, fix grammar, avoid vague phrases like "partially here," and give a clear comparison with one specific example from each country to illustrate your point.

Example: I don't have a strong preference because both countries offer great views. In India I love the colourful mountain villages and historic sites, while in Canada I was impressed by vast lakes and forests — for example, the scenery around Banff National Park was breathtaking.

× I'm a photogenic person. I like to pictures.

✓ I'm a photogenic person. I like to take pictures.

The verb 'like' must be followed by the base form 'to take' or the -ing form 'taking'; 'pictures' alone is a noun and cannot follow 'like' as the main verb. Use 'like to take pictures' or 'like taking pictures' to form a correct verb phrase. Suggestion: Use 'like to take pictures' or 'like taking pictures' depending on style.

× I like to take pictures a lot.

✓ I like taking pictures a lot.

Both 'like to take' and 'like taking' are acceptable; here 'like taking' sounds more natural for a general habit. This is not strictly incorrect but changing to 'like taking' fits common spoken English. Suggestion: Use 'I like taking pictures a lot' for naturalness.

× I take pictures whenever I see any eye-catching view in front of me.

✓ I take pictures whenever I see an eye-catching view in front of me.

Using 'any' in affirmative habitual sentences is unnatural; 'an' correctly introduces a single countable noun 'view'. Suggestion: Use the indefinite article 'an' before a singular countable noun.

× I like to take pictures of sunset.

✓ I like to take pictures of the sunset.

When referring to sunsets in general or a specific sunset, English typically uses the article 'the'. Omitting the article makes the phrase ungrammatical. Suggestion: Use 'the sunset' or plural 'sunsets' depending on meaning.

× I like to take pictures of anything that mesmerize my eyes.

✓ I like to take pictures of anything that mesmerizes me.

The relative clause needs a third-person singular verb 'mesmerizes' to agree with 'anything'. Also, 'mesmerize my eyes' is awkward; 'mesmerizes me' is idiomatic. Suggestion: Use subject-verb agreement and an idiomatic object: 'that mesmerizes me'.

× Her as I belong to a rural area back in my hometown.

✓ Here, as I belong to a rural area back in my hometown,

'Her' is a pronoun for an object; the speaker intended 'here'. Also the clause needs commas to connect it to the rest of the sentence. Suggestion: Use 'Here' and punctuate the introductory clause correctly.

× So obviously I have seen more views in ruler rural areas and it's not like I haven't seen any views in urban areas.

✓ So obviously I have seen more views in rural areas, and it's not that I haven't seen any views in urban areas.

'Ruler rural' is incorrect; likely 'rural' alone is intended. The phrase 'it's not like' is colloquial; 'it's not that' is clearer. Also punctuation improves readability. Suggestion: Remove 'ruler', use 'rural areas', and replace 'it's not like' with 'it's not that'.

× Urban areas have different sort of views but it are congested.

✓ Urban areas have different sorts of views, but they are congested.

'Different sort of views' needs plural agreement: 'different sorts of views' or 'different kinds of views'. Pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to plural 'urban areas', so use 'they'. The verb must agree with the plural subject: 'they are'. Suggestion: Use plural forms and matching pronouns: 'different sorts of views' and 'they are congested'.

× I have visited only two countries in my whole life that is India and Canada and I'll go partially here because I have seen a mesmerizing views in India and on the other hand I have seen eye-catching views in Canada so.

✓ I have visited only two countries in my whole life: India and Canada, and I'll compare them here because I have seen mesmerizing views in India, and on the other hand I have seen eye-catching views in Canada.

Multiple problems combined: 'that is' is awkward after listing; use a colon. 'I'll go partially here' is unclear; likely 'I'll compare them here'. 'a mesmerizing views' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'views' — remove 'a'. Present perfect 'have seen' is fine. Also add commas and conjunctions for clarity. Suggestion: Use correct punctuation for lists, match articles with noun number ('mesmerizing views'), and use clear phrasing like 'I'll compare them here'.