Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve clarity, grammar and concision. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, correct verb forms and word order, and limit the answer to about 2–4 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, "because", "so", "which"). Also give one or two specific examples of what you photograph and why.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me remember places I have visited and preserve special memories. For example, I often photograph mountain landscapes and rivers because their colors and light make me feel calm, and I sometimes post the best shots on Instagram to share them with friends.

Suggestion: This answer is clear and relevant but needs grammatical fixes, smoother linking, and one concise supporting detail. Use plural/singular agreement (mountains, trees), correct connectors (so those places feel nostalgic), and avoid unnecessary words. Add a brief specific example of an activity you enjoy there to strengthen the response.

Example: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy the natural scenery—mountains, rivers and trees—and the fresh, peaceful atmosphere. I grew up in the countryside, so those places feel nostalgic and help me relax; for example, I like hiking local trails and picnicking by rivers.

Suggestion: Clarify and correct grammar, be specific and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, fix mistakes (e.g., "that you wouldn't find in other countries"), and combine reasons with a short personal detail or plan. Avoid unclear phrases like 'The visit version follows this.'

Example: I prefer views in my own country, Nepal, because it has unique mountain and river landscapes you rarely see elsewhere. I haven't explored many of these places yet, so I plan to visit some national parks and highland villages next year to take photos.

× Yes, I love taking picture because they remind me of the place I visited and the day spends I the the the day I spend their photo helps me preserve special memories and often cheer up me when I feel bored and it feels it gives me a good vibes and I will upload it in in my online Facebook, Instagram just like that. So I.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures because they remind me of the places I visited and the days I spent. Their photos help me preserve special memories and often cheer me up when I feel bored. They give me good vibes, and I upload them to my Facebook and Instagram.

Multiple plural errors: 'picture' should be 'pictures' to match plural pronoun 'they'; 'place' should be 'places' to match plural visits; 'day spends' is incorrect form and should be 'days I spent'. Also 'their photo' is wrong reference; use 'Their photos' or 'These photos'. Suggestions: make subject and noun number agree and split the long run-on sentence into shorter sentences for clarity.

× Yes, I love taking picture because they remind me of the place I visited and the day spends I the the the day I spend their photo helps me preserve special memories and often cheer up me when I feel bored and it feels it gives me a good vibes and I will upload it in in my online Facebook, Instagram just like that. So I.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures because they remind me of the places I visited and the days I spent. Their photos help me preserve special memories and often cheer me up when I feel bored. They give me good vibes, and I upload them to my Facebook and Instagram.

Pronoun reference and word order errors: 'they' must refer to 'pictures'; 'cheer up me' should be 'cheer me up'; 'it gives me a good vibes' should be 'they give me good vibes' (plural agreement) or 'it gives me a good feeling'. Suggestions: ensure pronouns clearly match their antecedents and use correct word order for phrasal verbs like 'cheer up'.

× I prefer rural areas because I enjoy the natural scenery, rivers, mountain and trees and the fresh air, peaceful atmosphere.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I enjoy the natural scenery, rivers, mountains and trees, and the fresh air and peaceful atmosphere.

Plural noun form needed: 'mountain' should be 'mountains' to match 'rivers' and 'trees'. Also add 'and' between coordinated noun phrases for clarity. Suggestion: list multiple natural features in plural when referring to them generally.

× I grew up in the countryside so that those place feel nostalgic to me and remind me of relaxing work and outdoor activities.

✓ I grew up in the countryside, so those places feel nostalgic to me and remind me of relaxing times and outdoor activities.

Preposition and article issues: 'so that' is incorrect here; use 'so' to show result. 'those place' should be plural 'those places'. 'relaxing work' is odd collocation; likely 'relaxing times' or 'relaxing work' could be 'relaxing activities'. Suggestion: use 'so' for result, match number, and choose appropriate noun collocations.

× That's why I love rural area.

✓ That's why I love the rural area. OR That's why I love rural areas.

Number and article issue: 'rural area' needs either the definite article 'the' if referring to a specific rural area, or plural 'rural areas' for a general statement. Suggestion: choose 'rural areas' for general preference or 'the rural area' if speaking of a specific place.

× Personally, I prefer the views in my own country, Nepal, because it has many mountains and rivers with beautiful natural scenery that's wouldn't find out their country.

✓ Personally, I prefer the views in my own country, Nepal, because it has many mountains and rivers with beautiful natural scenery that you wouldn't find in other countries.

Several preposition and pronoun errors: 'wouldn't find out their country' is incorrect. Use 'you wouldn't find in other countries' or 'that are not found in other countries'. Also 'that's' should be 'that you' or 'that you would'. Suggestion: use 'in' to indicate location and 'other countries' for comparison, and ensure relative clause is formed correctly.

× I haven't explored many of those places yet, so I hope to visit them one day.

✓ I haven't explored many of those places yet, so I hope to visit them one day.

This sentence is grammatically correct. The present perfect 'haven't explored' correctly indicates past experiences up to now and 'hope to visit' correctly expresses future intention. No changes needed.

× The visit version follows this.

✓ I plan to visit them in the future. OR I intend to visit them someday.

The original phrase 'The visit version follows this' is unclear and ungrammatical. It likely aims to express future intention. Suggestion: replace with a clear, idiomatic phrase like 'I plan to visit them in the future' or 'I hope to visit them someday'.