Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Giảm tiếng “umm” và lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ; dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và mở rộng chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: nơi chụp, cảm giác khi chụp, mục đích). Cố gắng giữ tối đa 3-4 câu liên kết mạch lạc, dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “so” để giải thích lý do.

Example: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing sunrises and sunsets in natural settings because the colours and light create a peaceful atmosphere. For example, I often go to a nearby lake early in the morning to capture the reflection of the sky, which helps me relax and feel more creative.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Sửa lỗi phát âm/nhầm từ và ngữ pháp (ví dụ "country size screenery", "less gifts"). Trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó giải thích rõ ràng bằng 1-2 ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “so” để nối ý. Tránh câu dài lắp dài.

Example: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more relaxing than the city. For instance, I like walking along country lanes where the fresh air and open fields help me unwind after a busy week.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Loại bỏ nói nuốt như “well, you know, umm”; sửa ngữ pháp và ý không hợp lí ("bored my mind" nên là "broadens my mind" hoặc "refreshes my mind"). Nên nêu câu chủ đề rõ ràng và cụ thể lý do, kèm ví dụ ngắn về một nơi bạn muốn đến. Giữ 2-3 câu mạch lạc.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because traveling broadens my mind and exposes me to different landscapes and cultures. For example, I would love to visit Japan to see its cherry blossoms and traditional gardens, which would inspire my photography.

× taking photos of nature brings me a sense of calm and relaxing

✓ taking photos of nature brings me a sense of calm and relaxation

Use a noun to pair with 'sense of'. 'Relaxing' is an adjective; the correct noun form here is 'relaxation'. Replace 'relaxing' with 'relaxation' to make the phrase grammatically correct. Grammar Problem Type ID: 13

× I definitely prefer the country size screenery because I find rural less gifts much more peaceful and relaxing, and it's nice to get away from the hustle and bustle of the city especially

✓ I definitely prefer the countryside scenery because I find rural areas much more peaceful and relaxing, and it's especially nice to get away from the hustle and bustle of the city

Several word-choice errors: 'country size screenery' is incorrect; use 'countryside scenery' or simply 'the countryside'. 'Rural less gifts' is nonsensical; intended phrase is 'rural areas'. Place adverb 'especially' before 'nice' for natural word order. Fixing these gives clear meaning and correct adjective/noun usage. Grammar Problem Type ID: 13

× I enjoy walking in fresh air there

✓ I enjoy walking in the fresh air there

When referring to air generally in this context, use the definite article 'the': 'the fresh air'. Without 'the' the phrase sounds incomplete in English. This is an article-preposition combination correction. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× I enjoy the views in other countries because umm, I find that exploring new places really bored my mind and somehow inspire my creativity

✓ I enjoy the views in other countries because I find that exploring new places really broadens my mind and somehow inspires my creativity

Tense and verb form errors: 'bored my mind' is incorrect—use the verb 'broaden' to express expansion of perspective and conjugate to present 'broadens' to match singular subject 'exploring new places' (gerund acts singular). Also 'inspire' should be 'inspires' for subject-verb agreement with 'exploring new places'. These are present-tense subject-verb agreement corrections. Grammar Problem Type ID: 6

× You know, I really want to have a an opportunities to visit Japan someday

✓ You know, I really want to have an opportunity to visit Japan someday

Article and number agreement: 'a an opportunities' has duplicate articles and plural 'opportunities' conflicts with 'a/an'. Use 'an opportunity' (singular) or 'opportunities' without 'a/an'. Also remove duplicated 'a'. This fixes article and noun number errors. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22