Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar, sentence structure and word forms. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one brief supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and articles, and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I do, I usually take photos of landscapes like mountains, lakes and cityscapes because...'

Example: Yes, I do. I usually take photos of landscapes such as mountains, rivers and city skylines because I enjoy capturing different atmospheres and light conditions.

Suggestion: Focus on clarity and correct vocabulary. Begin with a direct answer (urban or rural), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Correct spelling (rural) and pronouns. Keep sentences short and coherent.

Example: I prefer rural views because I grew up in a crowded, noisy city and the countryside feels calm and peaceful. For example, quiet fields and green hills help me relax and think more clearly.

Suggestion: Answer directly and expand with a complete, coherent reason. Use correct phrasing ('I prefer views in other countries') and avoid sentence fragments. Add a specific example of what you learn from traveling to make your point concrete.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because traveling exposes me to new cultures and landscapes. For instance, visiting a coastal town abroad taught me different architectural styles and local customs, which broadened my perspective.

× Absolutely yes. So I'm normally take a picture with different view such as Mountain View, Liverview and Building View.

✓ Absolutely. I normally take pictures of different views, such as mountain views, river views, and building views.

The sentence has present tense and count noun errors. 'I'm normally take' mixes present continuous with simple present; use simple present 'I normally take' for habitual action. 'a picture with different view' uses singular where plural is needed and wrong preposition; use plural 'pictures of different views'. Capitalization of common nouns is unnecessary. Also 'Liverview' likely intended 'river view'. Improve by using consistent simple present for habits and matching singular/plural nouns. Suggestions: use 'I normally take' for routines; use 'pictures of' not 'a picture with'; pluralize 'views' and use correct nouns.

× I really like lular view that is because I live in the so so my city is really crowded and noisy, but I love you is really it makes me feel more calm.

✓ I really like rural views because I live in a city that is very crowded and noisy, but rural views make me feel much calmer.

Multiple errors: 'lular' is misspelling of 'rural' (word choice), 'view' should be plural 'views' to match general preference, 'that is because' is awkward; 'because' suffices. 'I live in the so so my city' is ungrammatical; correct to 'I live in a city that is very crowded and noisy'. 'I love you is really it makes me feel more calm' mixes pronouns and clauses; correct to 'rural views make me feel much calmer'. Also 'calmer' (comparative) is preferred over 'more calm'. Suggestions: fix vocabulary, simplify connectors, make subject-verb agreement and pronouns consistent, and use comparative 'calmer'.

× Others say are more likely to prefer view in other country. That is because I really love traveling. It gives me. Different knowledge and.

✓ I am more likely to prefer views in other countries because I really love traveling; it gives me different knowledge and experiences.

Errors: 'Others say are more likely' is incorrect subject and auxiliary; speaker should use 'I am more likely'. 'prefer view' needs plural 'views' and 'in other country' needs plural 'in other countries' when speaking generally. Sentence fragments 'It gives me. Different knowledge and.' should be combined into one sentence and 'different knowledge' is unnatural; 'new knowledge and experiences' or 'different knowledge and experiences' is better. Use present simple 'I am' for current preference. Suggestions: use correct subject 'I', plural nouns for general statements, and combine fragments into complete sentences.