Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và mạch lạc. Bạn nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ (ví dụ 'memories' và 'good memories' lặp). Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về loại khung cảnh bạn thích để câu trả lời giàu nội dung hơn. Lưu ý giữ tối đa 5 câu và dùng từ liên kết nếu thêm chi tiết.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve memories. For example, I like capturing sunsets on the beach and city skylines at night. These photos remind me of special moments and places I have visited.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Câu trả lời hiện tại thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng, có nhiều từ lặp và dùng từ thừa ('like'). Bạn nên trình bày một câu chủ đề nêu rõ sự ưu tiên, sau đó đưa 1-2 chi tiết so sánh sử dụng từ liên kết (for example, whereas, however). Tránh lặp từ và hoàn thiện câu cuối để thể hiện lựa chọn của bạn rõ ràng.

Example: Both urban and rural views are beautiful. Urban areas have vibrant cityscapes in the morning, with tall buildings and busy streets, whereas rural areas offer peaceful natural scenes like fields and forests. Personally, I prefer rural views because I enjoy the calm atmosphere and greenery.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Câu trả lời mơ hồ và có lỗi ngữ pháp (sai trật tự từ, lặp từ). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I prefer... or I prefer views in other countries because...), giải thích lý do cụ thể (familiarity, novelty) và kết luận ngắn gọn. Dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, so, therefore).

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they feel new and exciting to me. Since I have lived in my country all my life, the scenery there seems very familiar, so traveling abroad gives me the chance to see different landscapes and cultures.

× Yes I do. I want to capture the memories, the good memories of my life and those like the views I see.

✓ Yes, I do. I want to capture memories, the good memories of my life and the views I see.

Original has unnecessary words and awkward structure. 'the memories' and 'the good memories' is redundant; remove 'the' before 'memories' for natural English. 'those like the views I see' is ungrammatical; replace with 'the views I see' to correctly refer to the scenes being photographed.

× Two kind of views have like a different beautiful like in urban areas is like the city views the morning, the morning, but in the rural areas like is the peaceful place and like the nature's views and I think I prefer like.

✓ Two kinds of views are different and beautiful. In urban areas there are city views in the morning, while rural areas are peaceful with natural scenery, and I think I prefer the rural views.

Errors include wrong quantifier 'Two kind' (should be 'Two kinds'), excessive filler 'like', wrong word order and missing verbs. Use 'are' for plural subject and 'there are' for existence. 'nature's views' is awkward; use 'natural scenery' or 'natural views'. Remove fillers and clarify contrast with 'while'.

× I think I prefer this view in and other countries because like views in my country is like I live in here from since I was a child and I I see this too familiar.

✓ I think I prefer views in other countries because the views in my country are too familiar to me; I have lived here since I was a child and I have seen them a lot.

Original has wrong preposition phrase 'this view in and other countries' and incorrect tense and structure. Use 'in other countries' not 'in and other countries'. 'views in my country is' has subject-verb disagreement; use 'are'. 'I live in here from since' is redundant; use 'I have lived here since'. Also replace 'I see this too familiar' with 'they are too familiar to me' and add present perfect 'have seen them a lot' to express experience.