Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ihre Antwort ist grundsätzlich verständlich, wirkt aber etwas umgangssprachlich und unstrukturiert. Vermeiden Sie Füllwörter wie „uh“ und wiederholte Phrasen. Beginnen Sie mit einem klaren Themensatz, fügen Sie ein oder zwei konkrete Details hinzu und nutzen Sie ein verbindendes Wort, um die Antwort flüssiger zu machen. Achten Sie außerdem auf präzisere Formulierungen (z. B. „take photos“ statt „do pictures“) und korrekte Wortreihenfolge nach Phrasen wie „zoom in on".

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I visit a new city I often focus on the architecture of houses and zoom in to capture interesting details. This helps me remember the character of each place.

Suggestion: Die Antwort ist repetitiv und enthält viele Füllwörter und Wiederholungen, was die Klarheit beeinträchtigt. Formulieren Sie einen klaren Meinungs-Satz, geben Sie zwei konkrete Gründe und verwenden Sie Verbindungswörter (z. B. „because“, „for example“, „also"). Vermeiden Sie informelle Ausdrücke wie „way way more“ in der Prüfungssituation.

Example: I prefer urban views because cities offer a greater variety of sights. For example, I enjoy watching people in public spaces and photographing diverse architecture, such as historic facades and modern buildings.

Suggestion: Die Antwort ist verständlich, enthält jedoch Grammatikfehler (z. B. „using other countries“, „already know them“) und viele Fülllaute. Strukturieren Sie die Antwort: klare Präferenz, ein oder zwei Gründe mit Beispielen und ein abschließender Satz. Korrigieren Sie häufige Fehler bei Wortwahl und Satzbau (z. B. „prefer views in other countries“; „I already know the views in my country").

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they feel new and different to me. For instance, when I visit a foreign city I discover unfamiliar streets and architectural styles that I haven't seen at home, which makes photography more exciting.

× Yes, I like to do pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The verb 'like' is commonly followed by a gerund when referring to hobbies or preferences. 'Like to do pictures' is awkward and unidiomatic; use 'like taking pictures' to express enjoyment of the activity. Suggestion: use 'like' + verb-ing for general likes (e.g., 'I like swimming', 'I like taking photos').

× ...when I walk through the streets of a new city I explore, I try to zoom a little bit in to the architecture of houses and get a good shot of those houses.

✓ ...when I walk through the streets of a new city I am exploring, I try to zoom in a little bit on the architecture of houses and get a good shot of them.

The sentence mixes simple present with a participle phrase awkwardly; 'a new city I explore' should be 'a new city I am exploring' or 'a new city I explore' but sounds better with progressive for ongoing action. 'Zoom a little bit in to' is incorrect preposition order; use 'zoom in on'. Also avoid repeating 'houses' by using 'them'. Suggestion: use progressive for ongoing exploration and correct phrasal verb 'zoom in on'.

× As I just said, I prefer urban areas way way more because urban areas have a lot to see.

✓ As I just said, I much prefer urban areas because they have a lot to see.

Repeating 'urban areas' is redundant and wordy; replace the second occurrence with pronoun 'they'. 'Way way more' is informal and repetitive; use 'much prefer' for clearer, more natural expression. Suggestion: use pronouns to avoid repetition and choose appropriate degree adverbs ('much' rather than 'way way').

× Uh, you see different people walking around, you see.

✓ You can see different people walking around.

The original is a fragmented repetition ('you see... you see') that breaks sentence structure. Combine into one clear clause: 'You can see different people walking around.' Suggestion: avoid needless repetition and use modal 'can' to indicate ability to observe.

× As I also also already said, the architecture of houses and many more very interesting things.

✓ As I already said, the architecture of houses and many other very interesting things.

The phrase 'also also already' contains duplication; keep only 'already'. 'Many more very interesting things' is incorrect order and choice: use 'many other very interesting things' to mean additional items. Suggestion: remove duplicate words and use 'many other' before a plural noun.

× I definitely prefer using other countries.

✓ I definitely prefer other countries.

The verb 'prefer' does not require 'using' when comparing places; 'prefer using other countries' is incorrect because you do not 'use' a country. Remove 'using'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer other countries' or 'I prefer visiting other countries'.

× Uh, the views in my country are already know them and I love to explore new countries and new cities.

✓ Uh, I already know the views in my country and I love to explore new countries and new cities.

Word order and pronoun use are incorrect: 'are already know them' is ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'I already know the views in my country.' Use subject 'I' with verb 'know' and place 'already' before the verb. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb order and place 'already' appropriately; optionally say 'I already know the views here' for brevity.

× Uh, there are a lot of interesting new things while strolling around through the streets and those views are definitely more interesting.

✓ Uh, there are a lot of interesting new things to see while strolling through the streets, and those views are definitely more interesting.

Use infinitive 'to see' after 'things' to indicate purpose/observation. 'Strolling around through' is redundant—use 'strolling through' or 'walking through'. Also add a comma before 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: simplify phrases and use 'to see' when referring to things you notice.