Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition (e.g., 'capturing capture'), and limit to around 2–4 sentences. Use linking words to connect reasons (for example, 'because' or 'so'). Add one specific example of what you photograph to make your answer more vivid.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me remember places. For example, when I visit a mountain, I photograph the sunrise to capture the colours and the feeling of the moment. I also upload the best shots to social media to share them with friends.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and one concrete example. Avoid filler words ('like', 'more like') and grammatical errors (use 'architecture' singular/uncountable). Use a linking word such as 'because' to show cause.

Example: I prefer urban areas because the architecture is more varied and interesting. For instance, in big cities I can find historic cathedrals and modern skyscrapers close together, which gives me many photo opportunities. Also, the busy streets and colourful markets add life to my pictures.

Suggestion: Clarify your main idea and correct grammar (use 'has' not 'have', use correct place names and nouns). Avoid vague phrases ('beautiful worlds', 'factory Harbin') — be specific about locations and why you prefer them. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences with linking words like 'because' and give one clear example.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because it offers familiar but diverse scenery. For example, in Harbin I enjoy the unique historic buildings and riverside views, which give a special atmosphere I don't find elsewhere. Because I know the places well, I can capture meaningful photos that remind me of home.

× I love capturing capture the different places of the views and I can go through my phone when I go back and also I can share to my social media with my friends.

✓ I love capturing the different views, and I can look through them on my phone when I get home, and I can also share them on my social media with my friends.

Original contains a repeated verb 'capturing capture' and incorrect noun phrase 'places of the views'. Use the gerund 'capturing' once and 'the different views' is natural. 'Go through my phone when I go back' is corrected to 'look through them on my phone when I get home' for idiomatic tense and preposition use. 'Share to my social media' should be 'share them on my social media'. Suggestions: remove duplicate verbs, use correct prepositions ('on' social media), and match pronouns ('them') to 'views'.

× So I think it's I like it so much.

✓ So I think I like it very much.

Sentence is awkward and contains extraneous 'it's'. Use present simple 'I like it very much' to express a general preference. Replace 'so much' with 'very much' for smoother phrasing. Suggestion: avoid redundant words and keep the subject-verb structure clear.

× Definitely urban areas 'cause I can see more interesting architectures and they're like more like more than buildings in urban areas 'cause it's in a more like bigger cities.

✓ Definitely urban areas because I can see more interesting architecture and there are more kinds of buildings in bigger cities.

Informal ''cause' should be 'because'. 'Architectures' is uncountable or usually 'architecture' (no plural) or 'architectural styles'. Phrase 'they're like more like more than buildings' is ungrammatical; replace with 'there are more kinds of buildings'. 'It's in a more like bigger cities' is incorrect; use 'in bigger cities'. Suggestions: use full conjunction 'because', use 'architecture' or 'kinds of buildings', and simplify to clear comparative phrase.

× Absolutely my own country because my own country have a lot of beautiful worlds, especially the factory Harbin to have a good feels for us to see so and there have a lot of good interesting architecture.

✓ Absolutely my own country because my country has a lot of beautiful places, especially Harbin, which has a special atmosphere for us to experience, and there is a lot of interesting architecture.

Pronoun/repetition issue: repeating 'my own country' is redundant. Subject-verb agreement ('my own country have') is wrong; use 'has'. 'Worlds' is wrong word; use 'places'. 'The factory Harbin' is unclear; likely 'Harbin' (a city). 'To have a good feels for us to see' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'which has a special atmosphere for us to experience'. 'There have a lot' should be 'there is a lot' or 'there are many'. Suggestions: avoid repetition, use correct verb agreement, choose correct nouns ('places', 'architecture'), and rephrase awkward clauses.

× There are like more than buildings around the sea.

✓ There are many buildings along the coast.

'Around the sea' is awkward; 'along the coast' or 'by the sea' is more natural. 'Like more than buildings' is ungrammatical; use 'many buildings'. Suggestions: use precise prepositions such as 'along' or 'by' and avoid filler words like 'like' in formal responses.