Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your response more concise and natural by removing filler phrases (e.g. “you know”) and by using one clear reason plus a brief supporting detail. Also vary vocabulary (use “memories” and “share experiences”) and avoid redundancy. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I love taking pictures because they help me remember special moments. I also enjoy sharing them on social media to show friends different places I visit.

Suggestion: Correct grammar (subject–verb agreement) and avoid awkward expressions like “explode the city life.” Use linking words to contrast choices (e.g. “however” or “on the other hand”) and be specific about what you photograph in each setting. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: I prefer both, depending on my mood. For relaxation, I visit the countryside for peaceful landscapes and trees, but on other days I go to the city to capture skyscrapers, busy streets and modern architecture.

Suggestion: Avoid incorrect or unclear phrases (e.g. “land of God's own country” is awkward). Be concise: give a clear topic sentence stating your preference and then two specific supporting examples (e.g. mountains, monuments). Reduce repetition of “therefore” and check tense/modal use.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because India offers a huge variety of landscapes, from mountains and beaches to historic monuments. For example, I want to photograph the Himalayan ranges and several ancient forts I haven’t visited yet.

× Absolutely, I just love capturing moments as they help me to recall all the past memories and I can even share them on social media and you know, just have others experiences as well.

✓ Absolutely, I just love capturing moments as they help me recall past memories, and I can even share them on social media and, you know, let others experience them as well.

The sentence had issues with verb forms and noun phrases. 'help me to recall' is correct but more natural as 'help me recall' (omit to). 'all the past memories' is redundant; use 'past memories'. 'have others experiences' incorrectly uses 'have' with 'experiences' and plural possession; better is 'let others experience them' where 'experience' is a verb and refers to the moments. Also added commas for clarity and removed unnecessary words. Suggestions: omit unnecessary 'to' after 'help', avoid redundant modifiers like 'all the', and use appropriate verb constructions (let others experience) rather than 'have others experiences'.

× Whenever I want to relax and feel the calmness in the air, I would visit the countryside.

✓ Whenever I want to relax and feel the calmness in the air, I visit the countryside.

The original mixes general present preference with 'would', which is unnecessary. Use simple present 'visit' for habitual actions. 'I would visit' suggests conditional or habitual in some dialects but simple present is clearer. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual preferences (I visit).

× In contrast, when I wants to explode the city life and I wants to see the tall buildings and all the infrastructure around me, I would love to go to the city and photograph it.

✓ In contrast, when I want to experience city life and want to see the tall buildings and all the infrastructure around me, I would love to go to the city and photograph it.

'wants' is incorrect because the subject is 'I'; use 'want' (third person singular error). Also 'explode the city life' is incorrect collocation; likely intended 'experience city life'. Replaced second 'I wants' with 'want' and removed the repeated subject for smoother sentence. Keep 'would love' to express preference. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with subject 'I' and use correct collocations ('experience' not 'explode').

× I will prefer views in my own country as India is being considered as the land of God's own country.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because India is often considered God's own country.

'I will prefer' is awkward for a general preference; use simple present 'I prefer'. 'is being considered' is passive continuous and unnatural here; use 'is considered' or 'is often considered'. Also 'land of God's own country' is redundant/incorrect; common phrase is 'God's own country'. Suggestion: use simple present for preferences and standard idiomatic phrases ('God's own country').

× Therefore, there are so many mountains, beautiful beaches, sunsets and so many historical monuments which I haven't explored yet.

✓ There are many mountains, beautiful beaches, sunsets, and numerous historical monuments that I haven't explored yet.

Sentence had repetition ('so many' twice) and a relative clause that is acceptable but smoother as 'that I haven't explored yet'. Replaced 'so many' with 'many' and 'so many historical monuments' with 'numerous historical monuments' to avoid redundancy. Suggestion: avoid repeating phrases and use 'that' for defining relative clauses in this context.

× Therefore, I would love to go there and explore all the views.

✓ Therefore, I would love to go there and explore them all.

Grammatically okay, but 'explore all the views' is slightly awkward; 'explore them all' refers back to the views mentioned. Kept 'would love' to express desire. Suggestion: use a pronoun to avoid repetition and improve naturalness.