Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct word choice (e.g., 'personally' not 'personality'), and give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

Example: Personally, yes — I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember beautiful moments. For example, when I travel I photograph sunsets and cityscapes so I can look back on the colours and atmosphere. I also share some of these photos with friends on social media to show what I experienced.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and reduce repetition. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'there is unique serenity' → 'a unique serenity' or 'a peaceful atmosphere') and provide one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Finish the sentence fully.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because the countryside feels peaceful and the air is fresher. For instance, being surrounded by fields and trees helps me relax and disconnect from city noise, which makes my visits more restorative.

Suggestion: Give a direct balanced answer and avoid hesitations. Say why you like both, using linking words (for example, 'on the one hand... on the other hand...') and provide one clear specific example for each. Keep it concise and grammatically correct.

Example: I prefer both. On the one hand, I enjoy photographing views in my own country because I know the local spots and can capture familiar landscapes with personal memories. On the other hand, I love taking photos abroad because new countries offer different architecture and scenery to explore and learn from.

× Personality I like taking pictures of different views, uh, because, uh, in the future, uh, I have possibility, uh, to remind some beautiful moments.

✓ Personally, I like taking pictures of different views because in the future I will be able to remember some beautiful moments.

The speaker used 'Personality' instead of the adverb 'Personally' and the phrase 'I have possibility to remind' is ungrammatical. Use the adverb 'Personally' to express opinion. Replace 'I have possibility to remind' with 'I will be able to remember' to use correct modal/future construction and the correct verb 'remember' instead of 'remind'. Also remove filler words and unnecessary commas.

× So I always try to capture, uh, this moment and uh, also I like to share.

✓ So I always try to capture these moments and I also like to share them.

The noun 'moment' should be plural ('moments') to match 'always' and the general habit. Add the object 'them' after 'share' to make the sentence complete. This fixes wrong noun number and missing object.

× I prefer views in rural areas because rural In the rural areas the air is fresh and also there are unique serenity which helps me to rest and relax and also there are many greens which is.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because the air in the countryside is fresh and there is a unique serenity that helps me rest and relax, and there is a lot of greenery.

The original contains repeated and misplaced words ('rural In the rural areas') and article misuse. Use 'the countryside' or 'rural areas' consistently. Use 'there is' for uncountable nouns like 'serenity' and 'greenery' (singular), and 'a unique serenity' with 'that' to introduce a clause. Replace 'many greens which is' with 'a lot of greenery' to use correct noun and agreement.

× I prefer both uh, because of use in, in our own area and uh, in other country.

✓ I prefer both because I enjoy views in my own area and in other countries.

The phrase 'because of use in' is incorrect; replace with 'because I enjoy views in'. Use plural 'countries' for 'other countries' to match general meaning. Also 'my own area' is clearer than 'our own area' when speaking personally.

× Uh, umm is a always a unique.

✓ Each place is always unique.

The original is fragmented and ungrammatical. Provide a full sentence with subject and verb: 'Each place is always unique' conveys the intended meaning that every place is unique. This fixes sentence fragment and word order issues.

× I like to see my countryside, the new landscape and explore new places, but also.

✓ I like to see the countryside, discover new landscapes, and explore new places.

The original ends abruptly with 'but also' and uses inconsistent parallel structure. Use parallel verbs 'see,' 'discover,' and 'explore' and remove the dangling 'but also' to create a complete, well-structured sentence.