Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it relaxes me. For example, when I go out I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes, especially at sunrise, since the light makes the scenes more dramatic.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer then one or two specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid long, unstructured sentences and incorrect verb forms.

Example: I prefer rural views because they feel more peaceful and natural. For instance, I like photographing village scenes—old houses and fields—because I grew up there and they remind me of my childhood.

Suggestion: Answer directly and improve clarity. Use present simple for preferences and give a logical sequence with linking words. Fix tense and word choice errors (e.g. "prefer", "visited").

Example: I prefer views in my own country for now because I haven't visited many of its beautiful places. Therefore, I plan to explore local historical sites first, and only after that will I travel abroad to see other countries.

× Yes, I like to take a photo of different views because it gives me pleasure.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos of different views because it gives me pleasure.

After 'like' when expressing a general preference use the gerund (verb + -ing): 'like taking' rather than 'like to take' is acceptable but keep consistent with plural 'photos' when referring to more than one; also 'photo' should be plural to match 'different views'.

× When I go outside, I try to take a photos of landscape, countryside and city scenery.

✓ When I go outside, I try to take photos of landscapes, the countryside, and city scenery.

'Photos' should be plural to match 'take'; 'landscape' should be plural ('landscapes') when referring to various scenes; add the definite article 'the' before 'countryside' for natural reference; separate items with commas for clarity.

× I prefer the views in rural areas because it's a natural and also I was born in village so I love to taking a photos of village side and it gives me a extra feelings because I had been living there since my childhood.

✓ I prefer the views in rural areas because they're natural, and I was born in a village, so I love taking photos of the village and it gives me extra feelings because I have lived there since my childhood.

'It's' (it is) is incorrect for plural 'views' — use 'they're' (they are). 'A village' needs the indefinite article. Use the gerund 'taking photos' (not 'to taking a photos'). 'Village side' is unnatural—use 'the village' or 'village scenes'. 'A extra feelings' is wrong: 'extra' should not take 'a' and 'feelings' can be plural or 'an extra feeling' singular; here 'extra feelings' works without 'a'. Use present perfect 'have lived' to indicate an action continuing from past to present rather than past perfect 'had been living' which is used for past-before-past contexts.

× ...so I love to taking a photos of village side...

✓ ...so I love taking photos of the village...

'Love' as a verb is followed by a gerund for habitual activities: 'love taking' not 'love to taking'. Also use plural 'photos' and natural phrasing 'the village' instead of 'village side'.

× I prepared the views in my own country because I never visit so many beautiful places yet.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country because I have never visited so many beautiful places yet.

'Prepared' is the wrong tense and meaning; use 'prefer' to answer the question about preference. 'Never visit' should be present perfect 'have never visited' to describe life experience up to now. 'Yet' typically goes with present perfect and usually appears at the end: 'have never visited so many beautiful places yet' (better: 'have not visited many beautiful places yet').

× So first of all, I would love to travel my own country and historical place in my local area.

✓ So first of all, I would love to travel around my own country and visit historical places in my local area.

'Travel' needs a preposition when referring to a country: 'travel around my country' or 'travel in my country'. Add 'visit' to make 'visit historical places' grammatical. Use plural 'places' if speaking of more than one historical site.

× Then I will try to visit abroad.

✓ Then I will try to travel abroad.

'Visit abroad' is not idiomatic; use 'travel abroad' or 'visit other countries'. 'Try to visit abroad' is awkward—'try to travel abroad' or 'try to visit other countries' is clearer.