Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce hesitations and repetition, make sentences clearer and more concise, and add a linking word to connect the example. Also correct minor grammar (plural/singular) and use a stronger adjective to describe the feeling.

Example: Yes, I love photographing different views because it calms me and helps me relax. For example, I recently photographed a mountain lake at sunset, and the warm light and quiet atmosphere made the experience very peaceful.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations and pronunciation errors, use correct vocabulary (rural not ruler) and add a reason with a linking word to be coherent. Provide a specific example of what you like in rural views.

Example: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside feels more natural and unfiltered. For example, I enjoy seeing terraced fields and traditional houses, which show local culture and history.

Suggestion: Avoid absolute or exaggerated claims, keep sentences natural and grammatically correct, and give a concise reason plus a specific supporting detail. Use linking words to add contrast or emphasis rather than repeating preference.

Example: I prefer photographing views in my own country because I feel safer and more familiar with the locations. For instance, in Nepal I know the best viewpoints for mountain panoramas and local guides who help me access remote spots.

× Absolutely, I love taking photos of different views because it's very uh, calming and helps helps keep my mind peaceful especially when I'm photographing mountains and other natural landscape.

✓ Absolutely, I love taking photos of different views because it's very calming and helps keep my mind peaceful, especially when I'm photographing mountains and other natural landscapes.

Repeated word 'helps helps' is a duplication error (not in list) but main grammar issue is plural noun 'landscape' should be 'landscapes' to match 'other' and plural 'mountains'; this is a singular and plural issue (ID 1). Also remove filler 'uh' and add a comma before 'especially' for clarity. Suggestion: Use plural 'landscapes' when referring to multiple kinds of natural scenery and avoid repeated words and fillers.

× For instance, I recently took picture of mountain lake during sunset and the experience was both relaxed.

✓ For instance, I recently took a picture of a mountain lake during sunset and the experience was very relaxing.

Missing articles with singular nouns: 'took picture' needs 'a picture' (Article errors ID 22) and 'mountain lake' should be 'a mountain lake'. Also 'experience was both relaxed' is incorrect adjective choice and structure; 'relaxing' (present participle used as adjective) correctly describes the experience. Suggestion: Use 'a' before singular countable nouns and use 'relaxing' to describe something that causes relaxation.

× Well, Speaking of that, I really appreciate ruler area views rather than the urban area because rural area is most unfiltered, uh, countryside place where you can see variety of, uh, local cultural, uh, cultural heritage as well.

✓ Well, speaking of that, I really appreciate rural area views rather than urban areas because a rural area is a more unfiltered countryside place where you can see a variety of local cultural heritage as well.

Multiple issues: 'ruler' is a typo for 'rural' (spelling), 'the urban area' should be 'urban areas' to contrast plural views (Singular and plural issue ID 1), 'rural area is most unfiltered' needs comparative structure 'a more unfiltered' (Comparative error ID 25/Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs ID 13), and missing articles before 'a variety' and 'a rural area' (Article errors ID 22). Suggestion: Use correct adjective forms and articles: 'a rural area', 'a more unfiltered countryside place', and 'a variety of'.

× Definitely I prefer my own country view rather than other countries because it gives more sense of safety and security while taking pictures of my own country.

✓ Definitely I prefer views of my own country rather than of other countries because they give me a greater sense of safety and security while taking pictures at home.

'my own country view' is awkward and singular/plural mismatch; use 'views of my own country' (Singular and plural issue ID 1). Pronoun and verb agreement: 'it gives more sense' should be 'they give me a greater sense' to agree with plural 'views' and sound natural. Suggestion: Match number and use 'a greater sense' and 'give me' for clarity.

× And it is also known that Nepal is most beautiful country than other country in the world.

✓ And it is also known that Nepal is the most beautiful country in the world.

Incorrect comparative/superlative structure: 'most beautiful country than other country' mixes superlative and comparative forms incorrectly. Use the superlative with the definite article: 'the most beautiful country in the world.' Also 'other country' is wrong; not needed when using 'the most'. Suggestion: Use 'the most' plus noun and 'in the world' to express global superlative.