Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, reduce filler words (uh, um), correct grammar (use gerunds and tense), and add one specific example to support your statement. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I love photographing different views. I travel often and always bring my professional camera, so I capture landscapes, city skylines and local details. For example, last summer I photographed coastal cliffs at sunrise, which produced dramatic light and color that I later shared on social media.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear preference or a balanced statement, avoid repeating words, fix grammar ("and but" is wrong), and provide a specific reason and brief example using linking words (for example, however, because).

Example: I don't have a strong preference because each offers different attractions. Urban areas appeal to me for modern architecture and lively street scenes, whereas rural areas attract me because they are peaceful and offer natural landscapes; for instance, I enjoy photographing busy markets in the city but also quiet lakes in the countryside.

Suggestion: Remove fillers and grammatical errors, state a clear answer or explain balance, and give specific contrasting examples with linking words (for example, whereas, although). Correct noun-verb agreement and simplify phrasing to sound natural.

Example: I appreciate both domestic and international views for different reasons. For example, I love scenic landmarks at home, such as the Great Wall, because they are historically meaningful; whereas in other countries I enjoy photographing exotic architecture and unfamiliar cityscapes that broaden my perspective.

× ...each time I will bring my professional camera with me and taking different photos about the scenery and then post it to my moment.

✓ ...each time I will bring my professional camera with me and take different photos of the scenery and then post them to my Moments.

The sentence uses a coordinated verb structure: 'bring ... and taking' is incorrect because after 'and' the verb should match the form of the previous verb ('bring' -> base form). Use 'take' not 'taking'. Also 'photos about the scenery' should be 'photos of the scenery' (preposition error) and 'post it to my moment' should be 'post them to my Moments' (plural pronoun for 'photos' and correct noun for the social media feature). Combine corrections to maintain parallel verb forms and correct preposition and pronoun agreement.

× Urban areas are more convenient and more modern to me and but rural and rural areas are more peaceful and quiet.

✓ Urban areas are more convenient and more modern to me, but rural areas are more peaceful and quiet.

The original repeats 'and' and 'rural' redundantly and misuses conjunctions ('and but'). Remove the extra word and use a single contrasting conjunction 'but'. Also a comma before 'but' improves clarity. This fixes sentence structure and adjective use ('more peaceful and quiet' is acceptable).

× I can't uh say which one is more I like also because umm my own country have many beautiful scenery uh like the Great Wall, whereas other countries buildings are more are very different from my country is too exotic.

✓ I can't say which one I like more because my own country has many beautiful scenic places, like the Great Wall, whereas buildings in other countries are very different and seem exotic to me.

Multiple errors: 'my own country have' is wrong subject-verb agreement (country singular -> has). 'Many beautiful scenery' mixes countability; 'scenery' is uncountable, so use 'beautiful scenic places' or 'beautiful scenery'. 'Which one is more I like' has incorrect word order; correct is 'which one I like more'. Also 'other countries buildings' needs possessive or reordering -> 'buildings in other countries'. The phrase 'are more are very different from my country is too exotic' is ungrammatical; rewrite to 'are very different and seem exotic to me'. These changes correct pronoun/possessive usage, verb agreement, word order, and countability.