Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more direct and organized: start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like taking pictures of views, then give one or two specific supporting details (where and why). Avoid filler words and unclear vocabulary; use correct nouns (e.g., "scenes", "area") and simple grammar. Keep answers within 3–4 concise sentences and use a linking word like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, near my school there is a tree-lined path that looks beautiful at sunset, and I often photograph it because the light and colors are lovely. I prefer landscape scenes rather than photos of people.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly in one sentence, then give specific reasons and an example. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "rural", "mountain", "green", "fresh air") and linking words such as "because" and "for example". Avoid repetition and grammatical errors by proofreading short sentences.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because they are greener and the air feels fresher. For example, I enjoy mountain scenery and riversides where there are trees, open fields, and hiking trails that make the landscape relaxing.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific and accurate details. Replace unclear words ("gantry") with correct nouns (e.g., "country, region"). Avoid vague fillers and incorrect phrases (e.g., "ice mountain"); use precise descriptions like "snow-capped mountains" or "coastal cliffs". Limit to 2–3 short sentences and use linking words such as "because" or "for example."

Example: I prefer views in my own country because it has many varied landscapes. For example, my region has snow-capped mountains, rivers and coastal areas, so I often visit these places to enjoy the scenery and take photographs.

× In my personality, I don't like to take picture of my son, but I like to take, uh, the difference in abuse or scenario.

✓ In my personality, I don't like to take pictures of my son, but I like to take pictures of different scenes.

Preposition 'of' with 'picture' is correct but 'take picture' needs plural 'pictures' (singular/plural issue, ID 1). 'the difference in abuse or scenario' is unclear and uses incorrect prepositions and nouns; replace with 'different scenes' for clarity. Also 'In my personality' is unnatural; a better phrase is 'Personally' but this suggestion focuses on listed grammar types.

× In my personality, I don't like to take picture of my son, but I like to take, uh, the difference in abuse or scenario.

✓ In my personality, I don't like to take pictures of my son, but I like to take pictures of different scenes.

The noun 'picture' should be plural when speaking generally about taking several photos. Use 'pictures' not 'picture'. This avoids singular/plural mismatch (ID 1). Also ensure noun phrases are clear and countable.

× Example census in the near my school, it have a path so that you only front the path is very beautiful in the sense of time.

✓ For example, near my school there is a path so that when you walk along the path it looks very beautiful at certain times of the day.

Multiple preposition and structure errors: 'in the near my school' should be 'near my school'; 'it have' is incorrect (subject-verb agreement) and 'so that you only front the path' is ungrammatical. Rephrase with 'when you walk along the path' and use 'at certain times of the day' to express 'in the sense of time'. This addresses preposition misuse (ID 11) and also subject-verb agreement (ID 27).

× I would prefer the view or river area instead or even area because in the area area the views the views in from my eyes are greens and the fresh.

✓ I prefer views of river areas or rural areas because, to me, the views are green and fresh.

The original mixes conditional 'would prefer' with general preference; 'prefer' in present tense is more natural (ID 6). Remove repeated words and reorder for clarity. 'are greens and the fresh' is incorrect adjective usage; use 'green and fresh'. This fixes tense choice and adjective errors.

× I would prefer the view or river area instead or even area because in the area area the views the views in from my eyes are greens and the fresh.

✓ I prefer views of river areas or rural areas because, to me, the views are green and fresh.

Adjectives should not be pluralized ('greens' incorrect) and 'the fresh' is wrong; use 'green and fresh'. Also remove redundant words. This targets incorrect adjective forms (ID 13).

× So I like the Mountaineer areas and Amanda rural areas.

✓ So I like mountainous areas and remote rural areas.

'Mountaineer' is a noun for a person; use adjective 'mountainous'. 'Amanda' seems to be a misused word; replace with 'remote' or 'more rural' depending on intended meaning. This fixes incorrect word choice and pronoun/noun misuse (ID 12).

× So I would prefer the view from the rural area.

✓ So I prefer views from rural areas.

Use present simple 'prefer' for general preferences (ID 6). Make 'views' plural and 'rural areas' plural for generality.

× I would prefer the view from my own country because in my country they have a lot of beautiful scenarios.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because my country has a lot of beautiful scenery.

Use present simple 'prefer' for general preference (ID 6). 'They have' is incorrect when referring to 'my country' (use 'my country has'). 'Scenarios' is wrong noun; use 'scenery'.

× My gantry has umm uh my gantry ***** ambitious and then mountain and ice mountain.

✓ My country has, um, beautiful plains, mountains, and even snowy mountains.

'Gantry' is incorrect; likely meant 'country'. Fix pronoun/noun choice and word order. Use 'my country has' rather than repeating. This addresses incorrect word/pronoun usage (ID 12).

× So in the the view from my gantry are better than the other gantry.

✓ So the views from my country are better than those from other countries.

Subject-verb agreement: 'view... are' must agree; use plural 'views' with 'are'. Also use 'those from other countries' for comparison. This fixes subject-verb agreement (ID 27) and comparison reference.

× It has mountains and bees.

✓ It has mountains and bays.

'Bees' is incorrect in context; likely intended 'bays' or 'beaches'. Replace with the correct noun. This corrects a wrong noun that changes meaning (treated under incorrect use of adjectives/pronouns/nouns, ID 13).