Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but has minor fluency and accuracy issues (repetition 'the the') and could be slightly more concise. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, avoiding repetition, and adding one specific example to support your point. Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me preserve memories and capture unique places. For example, as an architect I often photograph facades and intricate details of historic buildings to study their design and textures.

Suggestion: Your response addresses the question but contains pronunciation/word choice errors ('brutal' instead of 'rural') and some grammatical issues. Reduce fillers (‘uh’), correct vocabulary, and use linking words to contrast urban and rural preferences. Provide one concise reason for each preference.

Example: I enjoy both urban and rural views. For instance, I like rooftop city vistas because the skyline and night lights feel exciting, while rural landscapes appeal to me for their calm fields and fresh air.

Suggestion: This answer is on topic but has several clarity and vocabulary mistakes ('since' → 'in', 'live visiting familiar sports' unclear, 'fresh experience' awkward). Avoid fillers, use correct collocations (e.g., 'familiar spots'), and give one clear reason for each preference. Keep sentences short and coherent with linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand'.

Example: I enjoy views both at home and abroad. At home I visit familiar spots because they feel comfortable and meaningful; however, when I travel I like discovering new landscapes and sharing those experiences with my family.

× As an architect, I also enjoy photographing buildings and architectural detail, especially the the.

✓ As an architect, I also enjoy photographing buildings and architectural details, especially the tall ones.

Original has 'architectural detail' which is singular and vague; context implies multiple details so plural 'details' fits (adjective/noun form issue). Also contains a repeated word 'the the' and lacks clarity; adding 'especially the tall ones' clarifies what the student admires. Suggestion: use correct plurality and avoid repeated words.

× Actually, I enjoy both urban and brutal areas.

✓ Actually, I enjoy both urban and rural areas.

The word 'brutal' is incorrect in this context; the intended adjective contrasting 'urban' is 'rural'. This is a word choice error (adjective misuse). Suggestion: choose the correct adjective that fits meaning.

× Uh, for example, I love rooftop city views because they both link skyline and twinkling lines at night feels exciting and energetic,

✓ For example, I love rooftop city views because the skyline and the twinkling lights at night feel exciting and energetic,

Original mixes subjects and verbs incorrectly ('they both link skyline and twinkling lines' and 'feels' mismatch). This is a sentence structure and subject-verb agreement issue. Correction makes 'the skyline and the twinkling lights' the compound subject and uses plural verb 'feel'. Also 'link' was unclear so removed. Suggestion: ensure compound subjects use plural verbs and choose clear nouns ('twinkling lights').

× I enjoy views since both uh, my own country and abroad.

✓ I enjoy views in both my own country and abroad.

Original word order 'since both uh, my own country and abroad' is incorrect and missing preposition; also 'since' is wrong here. This is a subject/phrase and preposition usage problem. Correction uses 'in both' to properly link locations. Suggestion: use 'in both X and Y' to indicate locations.

× At home, I live visiting familiar sports because they feel comfortable and meaningful.

✓ At home, I like visiting familiar spots because they feel comfortable and meaningful.

Original has multiple errors: 'live visiting' is incorrect verb choice and 'sports' should be 'spots' (noun meaning places). This is incorrect preposition/verb and word choice. Correct verb 'like visiting' expresses preference. Suggestion: use correct verbs and words ('spots' for places) and avoid wrong prepositions.

× But when I travel, I love discovering new landscapes and sharing those fresh experience with my family and friends.

✓ But when I travel, I love discovering new landscapes and sharing those fresh experiences with my family and friends.

Original uses singular 'experience' with plural demonstrative 'those'—article/number agreement error. This is an article/quantifier and noun number issue. Correction pluralizes 'experiences' to agree with 'those'. Suggestion: ensure demonstratives match noun number ('those' with plural nouns).