Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms and article use.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing different city and country views. For example, when I visit a new country I take many photos of streets and landmarks, so I often run out of phone storage and have to organize or delete images regularly.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer then explain with clear reasons. Use linking words (however, because, so) and correct vocabulary (urban/rural, skyline, countryside). Avoid fillers and incomplete sentences.

Example: I don't have a strong preference, but I slightly prefer urban views because I enjoy city skylines and architectural details. For instance, I like photographing modern buildings and busy streets because they feel energetic, and later I enjoy looking at these photos at home to remember the atmosphere.

Suggestion: Answer clearly and give specific reasons with correct grammar. Replace vague phrases with precise points and use linking words (for example, because, which). Avoid contradictory wording like "can't feel interested."

Example: I usually prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different architectural styles and cultural settings. For example, foreign buildings often have shapes and details I haven't seen at home, which I find fascinating and relaxing to photograph.

× Yes, I love taking pictures view of different cities or country.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different cities or countries.

Missing preposition and incorrect noun form: 'pictures view of' should be 'pictures of' (preposition error classified under present participle context of verb+preposition). Also 'country' should be plural 'countries' to match 'different' and 'cities'. Suggestion: use 'pictures of different cities or countries'. Note: This primarily involves preposition use and pluralization; corrected to fit the sentence.

× So usually when I visited the other country I too I takes a lot of pictures so usually I don't have much space in my phone and I mean the story is easy so I have to organize it.

✓ So usually when I visit another country I also take a lot of pictures, so I don't have much space on my phone and the story is long, so I have to organize them.

Tense and agreement errors: 'when I visited' suggests past but context is habitual; use present tense 'when I visit'. 'I too I takes' has subject-verb agreement and extra pronoun; use 'I also take'. Preposition: 'space in my phone' should be 'space on my phone'. 'the story is easy' likely intended 'the storage is full' or 'the story is long' — assumed 'the storage is full' but preserved sense by 'the story is long' and changed 'it' to plural 'them' for 'pictures'. Suggestion: Use consistent present simple for habitual actions, correct subject-verb agreement, and proper prepositions.

× I don't have a strong preference, but it uh, uh, I think usually our bonds because when I, when I take a picture of urban cave, I feel really relaxed and comfortable.

✓ I don't have a strong preference, but I usually prefer urban scenes because when I take a picture of an urban area, I feel really relaxed and comfortable.

Word choice and structure errors: 'our bonds' is incorrect; likely meant 'urban' or 'I usually prefer urban scenes'. 'urban cave' is incorrect collocation; use 'urban area' or 'urban scene'. 'but it uh, uh, I think usually' is disfluent; simplified to 'but I usually prefer'. Suggestion: Choose correct nouns ('urban area/scene') and simplify fillers for clarity.

× And after seeing the picture at home, it may.

✓ And after seeing the pictures at home, I feel the same relaxation.

Incomplete sentence: 'it may' is a fragment without clear subject or verb. Provide a complete clause that conveys intended meaning. Suggestion: Complete the thought, e.g., 'I feel the same relaxation' or 'it makes me feel relaxed'.

× Usually I prefer seeing the other country views because umm I love the seeing different view of different architecture shapes because I can't feel interested and also it makes us relaxed.

✓ Usually I prefer seeing views from other countries because I love seeing different architectural styles; they interest me and also make me feel relaxed.

Tense and word choice: 'the other country views' should be 'views from other countries'. Remove extra 'the' and correct pluralization. 'the seeing different view of different architecture shapes' is ungrammatical; use 'seeing different architectural styles'. 'I can't feel interested' is incorrect; use 'they interest me' or 'I find them interesting'. 'it makes us relaxed' should be 'they make me feel relaxed' to match subject and singular/plural. Suggestion: Use clear noun phrases ('architectural styles'), correct plural forms, and proper verbs for emotions ('interest', 'make me feel relaxed').