Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer communicates enthusiasm but has grammatical errors, some unclear phrasing and redundancy. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correct verb tenses, and concise supporting detail. Use one or two linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler phrases. Aim for natural expressions like “I love photography” and correct metaphors (e.g. “freezing a moment”).

Example: I love photography, so I often take photos whenever I go out. For example, I like capturing everyday scenes because a good photo can freeze a moment and remind me of a happy memory.

Suggestion: This answer is confusing and contains unclear references and grammatical mistakes. Organize your response with a clear topic sentence stating preference (or 'both'), then give two concise, specific reasons using linking words (for example, because/while). Avoid vague words and incorrect nouns (e.g. 'sky' instead of 'Skype').

Example: I prefer both urban and rural views. Urban areas are great at night because the city lights and skyline create dramatic photos, while rural areas offer peaceful natural landscapes and clear starry skies, which are perfect for long-exposure shots.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammar errors (e.g. 'enjoy to take' and 'a new things'). Provide a clear topic sentence and then two specific supporting reasons contrasting home and abroad. Use linking words (for example, however, also) and concise vocabulary to avoid repetition.

Example: I enjoy photographing views both in my own country and abroad. At home I know the best spots and can capture familiar cultural scenes, while traveling abroad I find new architecture and landscapes that inspire me and challenge my photography style.

× Yes, I loved photography so I usually I take photos wherever I am, so it's really exciting when I see them because he's like the moment freezing and it's a good memory for me.

✓ Yes, I love photography, so I usually take photos wherever I am. It's really exciting when I see them because it's like freezing the moment, and they are good memories for me.

Multiple errors: 'loved' is past tense but the student means a general preference, so use present simple 'love' (Grammar problem type ID 6: Present tense issue). Extra 'I' repeated ('I usually I take') is a sentence structure error (26). 'he's like the moment freezing' is incorrect pronoun and word order; 'it's like freezing the moment' or 'it feels like freezing the moment' correctly uses impersonal 'it' and correct verb order (12 Pronoun, 26 Sentence structure). 'a good memory' should be plural 'good memories' to match 'photos' (1 Singular and plural issue). Suggestions: use present simple for general habits, remove duplicate words, use 'it' to refer to the experience, place verbs in correct order and make plural agreement.

× Both because for me it's really important that you know your city and you capturing the moment for example, as night is the best moment for me because the Skype is really awesome, because there are stars and the rural areas is more.

✓ Both. For me it's really important to know your city and to capture moments. For example, night is the best time for me because the sky is really beautiful, with stars, and rural areas are even better.

Problems: 'you know your city and you capturing' mixes pronoun and verb forms; use infinitives 'to know' and 'to capture' (8 Verb + -ing form issue and 26 Sentence structure). 'as night is the best moment' should be 'night is the best time' (13 Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and 26). 'the Skype' is incorrect article and wrong word; use 'the sky' and no article for 'sky' when speaking generally (17 Incorrect use of the definite article / 22 Article errors). 'the rural areas is more' has subject-verb agreement error and unclear comparison; use 'rural areas are even better' (27 Subject-verb agreement / 25 Comparative and superlative errors). Suggestions: keep parallel infinitive forms, use 'time' for moments of day, use 'sky' without 'the' in this context, ensure plural subject and verb agree and make comparisons explicit.

× Both. In my country there are beautiful places, so I enjoy to take photos.

✓ Both. In my country there are beautiful places, so I enjoy taking photos.

Error: 'enjoy to take' is incorrect verb pattern; 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund 'taking' (8 Verb + -ing form). Article use and sentence structure are otherwise acceptable. Suggestion: after verbs of liking/enjoying use verb+ing (I enjoy taking photos).

× When I visit in other countries it's really exciting because it's a new place for me, a new things, a new views, so I really enjoy both.

✓ When I visit other countries it's really exciting because it's a new place for me, new things, and new views, so I really enjoy both.

Errors: 'visit in other countries' should be 'visit other countries'—no preposition 'in' after 'visit' (11 Incorrect use of prepositions). 'a new things' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' or make noun singular (1 Singular and plural issue / 22 Article errors). 'a new views' same error—use 'new views' (1/22). Also comma/coordination for list improved for clarity (16 Incorrect conjunction/use of commas). Suggestion: use correct verb+object pattern for 'visit', match articles to noun number, and list items in parallel form.