Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer communicates enthusiasm but has grammatical errors, redundancy and unclear phrasing. Keep sentences concise, start with a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., tense, articles, and word order) and avoid repeating phrases like "I love" immediately back-to-back.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines because the colours and shapes change every evening, and taking pictures helps me remember those moments.

Suggestion: The idea is understandable but the answer is confusing due to tense errors, unclear phrases ("indoor"), and lack of coherence. Provide a clear topic sentence stating your current preference, then explain why with a linking word (e.g., "because" or "nowadays") and a specific reason or example. Keep to 2–3 sentences and fix tense consistency.

Example: Now I prefer rural views rather than urban ones because I enjoy the peace and open space. For instance, I like walking by fields and listening to birds, which helps me relax after a busy week.

Suggestion: Your response expresses interest in travel but is grammatically weak and repetitive. Start with a direct statement of current preference, then contrast it with your long-term goal using a linking word (e.g., "although" or "but"). Provide one specific reason why you are exploring your own country now.

Example: At the moment I prefer views in my own country because there are many beautiful places I haven't visited yet. Although I hope to travel abroad in the future, I am focusing on local landscapes like coastal towns and national parks because they are easy to reach and very scenic.

× I love taking pictures because I love the beautiful things in my eyes I saw in my life and I thought taking pictures will make me to record this beautiful memories in my mind.

✓ I love taking pictures because I love the beautiful things I have seen in my life, and I thought taking pictures would allow me to record these beautiful memories in my mind.

Errors: incorrect preposition phrase 'in my eyes I saw' and incorrect use of 'to record' after 'make me' and wrong article/quantifier 'this beautiful memories'. Use 'seen' (past participle) with 'have' to refer to life experiences, remove 'in my eyes', use 'would allow me to record' or 'help me record' instead of 'make me to record', and use 'these' with plural 'memories'. Suggestion: simplify to 'the beautiful things I have seen' and 'help/would allow me to record these beautiful memories'.

× I thought that for me it depends on my ages because when I was young I thought the city was where I want to live and I want to explore.

✓ I think it depends on my age because when I was young I thought the city was where I wanted to live and explore.

Errors: tense inconsistency and incorrect plural 'ages'. The student uses past 'thought' and present 'depends' and 'want'; align tenses. Use singular 'age' to refer to one's stage of life. Change 'want' to past 'wanted' to match 'when I was young'. Suggestion: use 'I think' for general present statements and 'age' singular; keep past tense for past preferences.

× But as I get older and indoor and I thought the rural areas.

✓ But as I got older I preferred rural areas.

Errors: awkward structure 'and indoor', tense mismatch 'get' with past narrative, and unclear phrasing 'I thought the rural areas'. Replace 'get' with past 'got' to continue past-tense narration and remove 'indoor' which is incorrect here; use 'preferred rural areas' to convey change in preference. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense when describing past changes: 'As I got older, I preferred rural areas.'

× That's a good question, but umm for me, I thought I want to explore the whole world in my whole life and but now I just exploring my own country.

✓ That's a good question. For me, I have always wanted to explore the whole world, but now I am just exploring my own country.

Errors: tense inconsistency and awkward phrasing. 'I thought I want' mixes past and present; use present perfect 'have always wanted' to express a lifelong desire. 'I just exploring' is missing auxiliary verb 'am'. Also remove redundant 'in my whole life'. Suggestion: use 'have always wanted' for ongoing desires and present continuous 'I am exploring' for current action.

× It's beautiful since so I expected to see the whole world.

✓ It's beautiful here, so I expect to see the whole world someday.

Errors: incorrect use of 'since so' and tense inconsistency 'expected' vs present context. 'Since so' is ungrammatical; replace with 'here, so' to indicate the country is beautiful. Use present tense 'expect' for a current expectation and add 'someday' to clarify future intention. Suggestion: say 'It's beautiful here, so I expect to see the whole world someday.'