Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct basic grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and countable nouns (e.g., “gives me energy,” “family members”). Avoid repetition (e.g., “I like to take pictures” used several times).

Example: I enjoy photographing different views because it gives me energy and boosts my confidence. For example, I often take shots from several angles to capture special moments, and then I share the best photos with friends and family on social media.

Suggestion: Organize the answer: give a clear position (both) then explain reasons with linking words. Correct vocabulary and pronunciation-related words in writing: use ‘lighting’ not ‘lightning’, ‘crowdedness’ or ‘crowds’, ‘peace’ not ‘piece’. Reduce fillers (uh, like). Provide specific examples and keep sentences compact (max 4–5 sentences).

Example: I prefer both urban and rural views because each offers something different. In cities I like the bright lighting and busy streets that create dynamic photos, whereas in the countryside I enjoy peaceful landscapes, lakes and wide-open skies that are great for nature shots.

Suggestion: Answer directly and show reasons with clear grammar. Use correct phrase order (e.g., “I know where the best landscapes are”), plural forms (“family” → “family members”), and avoid vague fillers. Provide one or two specific reasons and a short example or memory to make it personal and convincing.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I know where the most beautiful landscapes and scenic spots are, and I can easily visit them with my family. For example, visiting a nearby lake reminds me of childhood picnics and makes me proud to show these places to friends.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because it's give me energy and I feel more confident and I like to take pictures and share on the social media with my friends.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they give me energy and make me feel more confident, and I like to take pictures and share them on social media with my friends.

Original uses 'it's give' which incorrectly mixes a contraction 'it's' (it is) with the base verb 'give'. The subject is plural ('pictures'), so use 'they give'. Also 'make me feel' is a more natural structure than 'I feel' following 'give me energy'. 'Share on the social media' is unidiomatic: use 'share them on social media' and include the object 'them'. Suggestion: match subject and verb number and include correct object pronouns. (Grammar problem type ID: 8)

× I love to take the pictures from all the angles so I can keep capturing the memories and I can share it with my family member.

✓ I love to take pictures from all angles so I can keep capturing memories and share them with my family members.

Original uses unnecessary definite article 'the pictures' and 'all the angles'; 'pictures' and 'angles' are general so no 'the'. 'Capturing the memories' should be 'capturing memories' for general meaning. 'Share it' is wrong because 'pictures' is plural, so use 'share them'. 'Family member' should be plural 'family members' when referring generally. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles, match singular/plural forms, and use correct pronouns. (Grammar problem type ID: 14)

× I prefer, uh, both urban areas and the remote areas as well because I like, like the lightning, lightning and the crowdness in the, uh, main cities.

✓ I prefer both urban areas and remote areas because I like the lighting and the crowds in the main cities.

Original has 'the remote areas' and 'the crowdness' and repeats 'lightning' (which means electrical discharge). Use 'lighting' (light conditions) and 'crowds' (plural noun). Drop unnecessary 'the' before general plural 'remote areas'. 'Crowdness' is not a correct noun. Suggestion: choose correct nouns and remove unnecessary articles. (Grammar problem type ID: 11)

× But uh, the piece and the scenery views and the landscapes and uh, sometime, uh, the lakes I like in the remote areas.

✓ But I also like the peace, the scenery, the landscapes, and sometimes the lakes in remote areas.

Original uses 'piece' instead of 'peace' (spelling error) and awkward noun combinations 'scenery views'. Use 'scenery' alone. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'The lakes I like in the remote areas' is awkward; place modifiers together: 'sometimes the lakes in remote areas'. Suggestion: correct spelling, use natural noun collocations, and position modifiers properly. (Grammar problem type ID: 13)

× So it's all.

✓ So that's all.

Original 'So it's all' is unnatural; 'that's all' is the common closing phrase meaning 'that's everything'. 'It's all' is grammatically odd here. Suggestion: use idiomatic closing phrase. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× I like, uh, my own country's views because, uh, I know where is the landscapes are, where the nice sceneries are and I can go with my families and I can remember my childhood, uh, things, what, whatever I enjoy over there and more important things, it makes me a proud if these are sceneries are in.

✓ I like my own country's views because I know where the landscapes and nice scenery are, I can go with my family, and I can remember things from my childhood that I enjoyed there. More importantly, it makes me proud if these sceneries are in my country.

This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect word order 'where is the landscapes are' should be 'where the landscapes are' (subject after verb error), 'sceneries' is uncountable so use 'scenery', 'families' should be 'family' when referring to one's family, and 'it makes me a proud' wrong article and adjective order—use 'proud' without 'a'. Also 'if these are sceneries are in' is ungrammatical; clarify as 'if these sceneries are in my country'. Suggestion: simplify into shorter clauses, correct noun forms, fix word order, and remove unnecessary articles. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)