Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevap daha net ve öz olmalı; giriş belirsizliğini kaldırın, dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin ve nedenlerden kısa örnekler verin. Örneğin, kameraya olan güvensizlik ve arkadaş fotoğrafları çekme eğiliminizi açıkça belirtin. Bağlaçlar (because, so) kullanarak neden-sonuç ilişkisi kurun ve tekrarları atlayın.

Example: I don't usually take landscape photos because I'm not confident with photography. For example, I often feel disappointed when my pictures turn out blurry, so I mainly take photos of my friends, which I find easier and more enjoyable.

Suggestion: Cevabınızı doğrudan ve kısa bir konu cümlesiyle verin, sonra doğum yeri ve nedenleri gibi spesifik destekleyici detaylar ekleyin. Tekrarlardan kaçının ve bağlaçlarla nedenleri düzenli sunun (for example, because, therefore). Dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (born in an urban area, favorite place).

Example: I prefer urban areas because I was born and raised in a city. For example, I enjoy the variety of shops and restaurants, and I appreciate the easy access to public transport, so city views feel more familiar and exciting to me.

Suggestion: Daha doğal ve öz bir ifade kullanın; tekrarları silin ve tercih sebeplerinizi somut örneklerle açıklayın. "I prefer both" gibi genel ifadeyi takip eden net nedenler verin (culture, scenery, new experiences). Bağlaçlarla (because, for example) mantıklı bağ kurun.

Example: I enjoy both, but I prefer views in other countries because I love discovering new cultures and landscapes. For example, when I travel I like to see historic sites and different architecture, which gives me new perspectives and memories.

× Uh, I didn't know because I'm not professional of it and it's demotivates me when I'm taking bad pic, bad pictures and I'm general generally uh, taking my friends pictures.

✓ Uh, I don't know because I'm not a professional at it and it demotivates me when I take bad pictures, and generally I take pictures of my friends.

The sentence contains several issues: 'I'm not professional of it' uses incorrect preposition and missing article — correct is 'not a professional at it' (preposition 'at' and article 'a'). 'It's demotivates me' mixes subject and verb form; use 'it demotivates me' or 'it demotivates me when I take...' and ensure verb form 'take' (present simple) matches habitual action. 'Bad pic, bad pictures' is redundant; use 'bad pictures'. 'I'm general generally' is incorrect word form and placement; use 'generally' and reorder to 'generally I take pictures of my friends'. Suggestions: use 'a professional at' for ability/skill, use consistent present simple for habits, remove redundancies, and place adverbs correctly.

× I prefer urban areas because I'm, I was born in urban, uh, places, which is my favorite places and I'm like, I love it.

✓ I prefer urban areas because I was born in urban places, which are my favorite, and I love them.

Problems: 'I was born in urban, uh, places' is awkward — 'urban places' is fine. 'Which is my favorite places' mixes singular 'is' with plural 'places'; correct agreement is 'which are my favorite'. Also 'I'm like, I love it' uses singular 'it' for plural 'places' — use 'them'. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement when referring to plural nouns, and match pronoun number to the noun (they/them for plural). Use concise phrasing without fillers.

× I prefer both, but mostly like other countries because I love other countries.

✓ I prefer both, but mostly other countries because I love visiting them.

Redundancy and awkward phrasing: 'mostly like other countries' should be 'mostly other countries' or 'I mostly prefer other countries'. 'I love other countries' is okay but repetitive; better to specify action 'I love visiting them'. Suggestion: remove repeated nouns and use pronouns to avoid repetition, and choose proper verb 'visiting' with preposition omitted here.

× I like visiting so much. I like traveling so much. Like uh, I do want to prefer other countries.

✓ I like visiting so much. I like traveling so much. I would prefer other countries.

'I do want to prefer other countries' is unidiomatic: 'prefer' expresses a general preference and doesn't combine well with 'do want to'. Use 'I would prefer other countries' to state preference or simply 'I prefer other countries'. Alternatively, 'I do want to visit other countries' if intention is meant. Suggestion: choose correct modal or conditional form ('would prefer') and use consistent verb forms for preferences.