Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, avoid incorrect word choices and unnecessary phrases, and give a specific supporting detail with a linking phrase. Keep it under 5 sentences. For example, replace awkward phrases like “people views,” “success at City Escaped,” and unclear clauses with precise descriptions (e.g., landscapes, city scenes, local markets).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me preserve memories. For example, when I travel to a city I often photograph street scenes and colorful markets to remember the atmosphere and details. This way I can look back and recall the light and colors.

Suggestion: Improve clarity and word choice, and connect ideas with linking words. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then add specific reasons and examples. Avoid invented or incorrect phrases (e.g., “read of dear,” “hear many words,” “meal ducks”). Use concrete sensory details and logical linking (e.g., “because,” “also,” “for example”).

Example: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and give me a strong sense of calm. Also, I enjoy seeing wildlife and hearing natural sounds like birdsong. For example, when I visit the countryside I often photograph ducks and grazing animals to capture the quiet atmosphere.

Suggestion: Make the answer grammatical and specific: state your preference clearly, give 1–2 concrete reasons, and link ideas with simple connectors. Correct grammar (e.g., “I prefer other countries”), avoid repetition, and provide a brief example of a place or feature you like abroad.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because I often find different landscapes and cleaner environments that interest me. For example, I enjoy photographing coastal towns abroad where the architecture and seaside light look very different from my hometown.

× I enjoy taking pictures of different people views because photography helps me capture memories and appreciate details I might otherwise miss.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures of different people's views because photography helps me capture memories and appreciate details I might otherwise miss.

The possessive form is required to show that the views belong to people. Use an apostrophe and s (people's). Also 'different people views' is ungrammatical word order; 'people's views' is correct. Suggestion: Use the possessive form for nouns showing ownership (people -> people's).

× For example, I often photograph success at City Escaped where traveling to remember the colors and atmosphere.

✓ For example, I often photograph scenes at City Escapes when I travel to remember the colors and atmosphere.

The original sentence has incorrect nouns and a broken clause. 'Success' is the wrong word; 'scenes' fits photographing. 'City Escaped' is not idiomatic; likely 'City Escapes' or 'the city.' 'where traveling to remember' is ungrammatical; replace with 'when I travel to remember.' Suggestion: Use correct nouns for context and connect clauses with 'when' for time rather than isolated gerunds.

× I prefer rural areas because they are peaceful and give me a read of dear sense of calm.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they are peaceful and give me a real sense of calm.

The phrase 'read of dear' is incorrect; likely intended 'real' instead of 'read' and remove 'dear.' Use 'a real sense of calm.' Suggestion: Choose correct adjective ('real') and standard noun phrase order ('a real sense of calm').

× I also enjoy the wildlife.

✓ I also enjoy the wildlife.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no change. It is included to confirm correctness.

× There you can hear many words and see animals, which helps meal ducks and escape the noise of the city.

✓ There you can hear many birds and see animals, which helps me relax and escape the noise of the city.

'Many words' is incorrect; context requires 'birds.' 'Meal ducks' is garbled; likely 'me relax.' The verb form should be 'helps me relax' (object pronoun + base verb). Suggestion: Use appropriate animal vocabulary and the correct verb phrase 'helps me relax.'

× I prefer using other country because other countries are very peaceful and very clean and their environment is very. Lovely.

✓ I prefer visiting other countries because they are very peaceful and very clean, and their environment is lovely.

'Using other country' is incorrect; use 'visiting other countries.' Also sentence fragments and punctuation: 'their environment is very. Lovely.' should be combined as 'their environment is lovely.' Remove extra 'very' before a period. Suggestion: Use correct verb collocations ('visit countries') and ensure sentence is not fragmented; place adjectives correctly before nouns and avoid unnecessary periods.

× So I prefer bills in other country.

✓ So I prefer being in other countries.

'Bills' is incorrect in context; likely 'being' or 'living.' Also use plural 'countries' and include the verb 'being' to form a correct clause: 'I prefer being in other countries.' Suggestion: Match singular/plural forms and use correct verb to express preference (prefer doing something).