Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cần nói trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, tránh lặp từ; diễn đạt rõ ý định (ví dụ: thích chụp cảnh vì lưu giữ kỷ niệm hoặc vì đẹp). Nên dùng 2-3 câu, thêm chi tiết cụ thể và dùng từ nối nếu cần.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me capture memories and appreciate the scenery. For example, when I visited Remorbury, I took photos of the riverside and old buildings to remember the atmosphere.

Suggestion: Cần nêu rõ ưu tiên (urban or rural), dùng cấu trúc chủ đề rồi giải thích lý do; tránh tiếng lắp và từ không phù hợp. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể và dùng liên từ (because, so, for example). Giữ 2-3 câu súc tích.

Example: I prefer rural views because they help me relax and feel peaceful. For example, I love beaches and countryside landscapes where I can unwind and create lasting memories.

Suggestion: Cần trả lời trực tiếp (own country or other countries), sửa ngữ pháp và phát âm, loại bỏ lặp từ, và giải thích vì sao bằng lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: văn hóa, cảnh đẹp, kỷ niệm). Dùng 2-3 câu và từ nối để mạch lạc.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I feel connected to the culture and landscapes of Vietnam. For instance, I enjoy the familiar greenery and historic sites that remind me of home.

× I like different wheels because it's give me it give me a a view of Remorbury big for the same.

✓ I like different views because they give me a view of Remorbury and the surrounding area.

The student used incorrect pronouns and singular/plural forms. 'Wheels' is wrong for 'views'. 'It' is used where the subject should be plural, so use 'they' with 'views' (subject-verb agreement). 'Give' needs to match the plural subject: 'they give'. The phrase 'a view of Remorbury big for the same' is unclear; I corrected it to 'a view of Remorbury and the surrounding area' to convey likely meaning. Suggestion: identify the correct noun (view/views), match pronouns to number (they for plural), and ensure verb agrees with subject (they give).

× Unlike different view because it's made me to relax and, and, uh, give me a, a memory for exam, uh, for example, uh, beach.

✓ I prefer different views because they help me relax and give me memories; for example, the beach.

'Unlike' is misused; use 'prefer'. 'View' should be plural 'views' and requires plural pronoun 'they'. 'It's made me to relax' is incorrect: use 'they help me relax' (no 'to' after 'help' in this sense). 'Give me a memory' is better as 'give me memories'. 'For exam' likely aimed for 'for example'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for likes/comparisons, match plural nouns with plural pronouns and verbs, use 'help me relax' and 'for example' correctly.

× I like a view my country because I like us Vietnam and I very I like I love very most of its mom and Vietnam.

✓ I like the views of my country because I love Vietnam and most of its places.

Sentence has incorrect articles and pronouns and awkward phrasing. 'I like a view my country' should be 'I like the views of my country'. 'I like us Vietnam' is incorrect; use 'I love Vietnam' or 'I like Vietnam'. 'I very I like I love very most of its mom and Vietnam' is unintelligible; likely meant 'I love most parts of Vietnam' or 'I love most of its places'. Suggestion: use 'the views of my country', 'I love Vietnam', and 'most of its places' to make a clear, grammatical sentence.