Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and clear with a topic sentence, avoid repetition, use correct verb forms and articles, and give one or two specific details linked with connectors. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences). For example, say whether you like taking pictures, then add why and give a brief example.

Example: Yes, I do enjoy taking pictures of different views. I usually don’t take photos all the time, but when I see a particularly beautiful scene I can’t resist photographing it. For example, last month I photographed a sunset over the river because the colours and reflections were stunning.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. Reduce hesitations and filler words. Use correct vocabulary (countryside, nature, landscape) and one short example to support your opinion.

Example: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I love natural landscapes. For instance, I enjoy seeing green fields, trees and rivers, which make me feel relaxed and peaceful.

Suggestion: Give a clear answer (preference or no preference) in the topic sentence, then explain briefly with specific details and avoid vague phrases like “in trouble”. Use correct place names or say ‘my hometown’ if unsure. Keep it short and coherent with linking words.

Example: I don’t have a strong preference between my country’s views and those abroad because both can be beautiful. However, in my country I especially like the views in my hometown, where the old streets and nearby hills create a charming atmosphere.

× Mostly I am not a person who love take a little big picture, but sometimes I see I see places it.

✓ Mostly I am not a person who loves to take many pictures, but sometimes I see a place that is incredibly beautiful.

The sentence has multiple structure issues: incorrect verb forms, word order, and unnecessary words. 'love take' should be 'loves to take' (third person singular verb and infinitive with to), 'a little big picture' is unclear and replaced with 'many pictures' or 'large pictures' depending on meaning, and 'I see I see places it' is ungrammatical; change to 'I see a place that is incredibly beautiful'. Improve by keeping subject-verb agreement, using correct infinitive forms, and simplifying word order.

× It is incredible beautiful, so I couldn't prevent myself to some fantastic pictures for this.

✓ It is incredibly beautiful, so I couldn't stop myself from taking some fantastic pictures of it.

Use the adverb 'incredibly' to modify 'beautiful'. 'Couldn't prevent myself to' is incorrect; correct phrasing is 'couldn't stop myself from' plus gerund 'taking'. Use 'pictures of it' to indicate the object. Suggest practicing adverb forms and common verb patterns (stop someone from doing something).

× I am briefly reviews in countryside because I I love some the view of umm, planet and the green trees, umm, water and I I prefer natural, uh, views.

✓ I prefer being in the countryside because I love the views of the fields, green trees, and water; I prefer natural views.

Original has wrong verbs and word choices ('briefly reviews'), repetition, filler words and incorrect noun 'planet'. Replace with 'prefer being in the countryside' to express habitual preference, use 'the views of the fields' or 'scenery' and list items with parallel structure. Remove fillers and repeated words. Practice using 'prefer' with gerund or noun phrases and maintain parallel lists.

× I am in trouble to any other country so I don't have a opinion if I I prefer my country sense or or other countries views uh but in my country I prefer umm views in payroll city more than any other city so.

✓ I have not traveled to other countries, so I don't have an opinion about whether I prefer views in my country or in other countries. However, in my country I prefer the views in the capital city more than in other cities.

The sentence contains incorrect idioms ('in trouble to any other country'), article errors ('a opinion'), tense and structure issues. Use 'have not traveled to other countries' to express lack of experience, 'have an opinion' for articles, and 'whether' to introduce alternatives. Replace 'payroll city' with 'capital city' assuming intended meaning; if another city was meant, use its correct name. Break into two sentences for clarity. Practice using correct verbs for experience (have traveled), articles before countable nouns, and conjunctions like 'whether'.